Reviews for A Mysterious Case Of Mistletoe Fever
Ice Demon Ranger chapter 4 . 1/6/2011
A most interesting twist on a mistletoe story.
A True Dreamer chapter 4 . 1/6/2011
Well... I didn't hate it but I didn't love it either... If you keep doing it i'll just adjust :]]

anyway, great hook up, but I agree with hermione that he really should have just told her this stuff.

I see this is still TBC :]] Kind of excited about it! I know it probably wouldnt be a ton of chapters but this is fun while it last.
flowersNfreaks chapter 4 . 1/6/2011
Wow, that was fucking HOT! Your writing style was really good, I enjoyed it and can't wait for more.
JadedQuill129 chapter 4 . 1/6/2011
oh. hell. hot. shit.

DAMNIT. your stuff always leaves me speechless. Geez.

Well, as for the not so typical dialogue formatting, it looks fine, but it's nothing very extraordinary :) Great chapter though.

Agagaga, Draco Malfoy's girlfriend. Oh geez louis sound's lovely.
DaOnLeeSam chapter 4 . 1/6/2011
LOVED it! Update soon :)
Railway Station chapter 4 . 1/6/2011
YAY they're dating~!
Glorioux chapter 4 . 1/6/2011
I like this style a lot. While dialogue let's itself for faster pace interaction, it does not allow the reader a chance to be submerged in the scene. I, personally, want to see thru the writer's eyes a little more. To concentrate in the emotions elicited by the surroundings, and the subjects.

Sexy fic.
RawSugarX23 chapter 4 . 1/5/2011
I soo love the new style of dialogue you included in there...especially the part when he spanked her and she called him a fink. Hilarious! Definite favorite right here! goddamn, Draco Malfoy is effing HOT!
frozenfiery chapter 4 . 1/5/2011
*fans slef* phew, that was hot. and yay! draco's mione's bf! haha finally!
euendo chapter 4 . 1/5/2011
Ahhhhhhh. This was so sensually satisfying. I liked the dialogue! It made a nice change, but I think I still do prefer your old style. ;) Maybe you could throw it in every once in a while?

A thing that kept nagging at me, though - when Draco was explaining why he'd gone so abruptly at the end of last chapter. I don't know, it was probably just me, but I wasn't completely convinced; his story seemed a little weak, but I guess you were just working with what you'd given yourself from the previous chapters (Myrtle's and McGonagall's behavior..?).

The shagging soon distracted me from worrying about Draco's credibility, anyway. 3
thelovelykay chapter 4 . 1/5/2011
I love this fic , amazing job!
Jahomba777 chapter 4 . 1/5/2011
I love this story. This chapter started out really good for me, but to be perfectly honest I didn't like the new writing style for the sex scene. It felt disconnected and it broke the flow. I just think all of the sex scenes you write are so passionate, sexy and descriptive. This one felt more like they were chatting over coffee and the emotion was taken out of it. Despite this, I still enjoyed the chapter, and now I'm curious to see just how many people are involved in the mistletoe. Hope you can update soon! :)
SlytherinPrincessxXx chapter 4 . 1/5/2011
Scrumptious as always. I loved the new play with the dialogue. It's very fun and flirty. I hope to see more of it in the future. You always keep me anticipating the next chapter, waiting on the edge of my seat for more yummy stories. Update soon.
T.O.D.818 chapter 4 . 1/5/2011
What a funny/awkward convo to have during sex but I enjoyed it. Can't wait for the nxt chps
laurelad12 chapter 4 . 1/5/2011
LOVED LOVED LOVED this chapter! I'm a huge fan of yours (I've read just about every story on your page), and I have to say I really enjoyed this chapter. The twist at the beginning is great, and this particular Draco works fantastically with this Hermione.

I really liked the dialogue in the smut section, partially because it felt a little more realistic and it made it a more interesting read (I love how you normally write your dialogue, but I kind of loved the utter lack of dialogue description in this section too). However, I think maybe it could be clarified a bit; sometimes it was easy to tell when it was Draco and when it was Hermione, but a couple times I had to double back and check previous lines to figure out the flow of the conversation.

youawesome. just fyi :D
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