|Reviews for The World Ruled by a Slave|
| 51 chapter 1 . 5/8
wow. super well written. ive read this like 4 times and each time i think, "this is amazing. i love it"
not a super big fan of het endings like that, if that was what you were going for, but everything else is sooo good. thanks for posting it
| Cytrus chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Great idea coupled with great execution. What more could you want?
| Spiders Wearing Tiny Hats chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
The ending was totally unexpected and I loved your characterization of Tonegawa. You really blew me away with Tonegawa's actions and I really liked your descriptions of his past. The only thing I disliked on the story were the zawas; I think using them less would've had more effect. Still, I liked everything else and I think you did a great job.