Reviews for Grow Together |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really love how you have made feel like it is part of their story. Hope you can update soon! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() School has been eating my life, I've been trying to catch up on this story for weeks now! Haha I like Katniss thinking of a real bear paw when she hears bear claws. Of course she wants to put cheese in it. Katniss thinks absolutely every baked good can be improved with cheese. I like how Katniss can never really let go of her fear of not having enough to eat. The "we shouldn't waste food" comment really speaks to that in my opinion. I'm glad that Katniss saw something was wrong with Peeta. It highlights how use to one another they are. Those pills are seeming more and more useless all the time. Seriously. I have such issues with Peeta's mom. Because I really don't think the story you have him tell here is all that unlikely to have happened at some point in his life. I feel so bad for both of them because they desperately need the comfort but it's so hard for them to accept from one another no matter how badly they want it. I love Peeta's conversation as he's falling asleep. I think it's just what Katniss needed to hear. I think the way you handle the flashbacks is really well done. I get them and it's not something that can be shaken off really easily. Even when I do get up and do stuff there's still that lingering feeling of unease which I think you capture really well. Onto chapter 11! You did a great job with Peeta's flashback and Katniss' reaction. |
![]() ![]() Hi! Sorry, I was a bit too lazy, but I'll try to give two reviews for this chap. Yay! :D I really, really liked this chap. Please update soon! I don't know why, but I want know what happens next. (I mean, there's no cliffhanger or anything.) Again, please update soon! XD -Amy Stardust |
![]() ![]() Love it!... Update soon... The best fan fiction for Hunger Games I have read... Update Soon... Update Soon... :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cannot get myself away from this. keep writing. love it a ton. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is one of the best stories I have read |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) Adorable. As always, this chapter was amazing! Keep up the brilliant work! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME! pls write more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey hey! Niiiiiiiiice story! Keep writing! really like it, ur super talented! ~Jayne |
![]() ![]() ![]() Peeta is such a saint! Katniss is one confused and confusing person! That said, she's also entertaining as you write her - I laughed at the slugs line. And I like how she's rationalizing all these little things, slooooowly letting down her guard. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. It's some really great writing(: Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really liked this chapter! peeta still wants her, its known. and katniss wants him, but she would admit it, yet. well, thats what i think. :) |
![]() ![]() This chapter was so perfect ! Perfect characters ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() We seem to share a fascination with their scars. I loved the building tension in this chapter. It felt very real, sweet, but still very Katniss. Her vision of where he would be without her was heartbreaking, silly, but the kind of thing we think when we are being paranoid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwwwww SOOO CLOSE! gahhh c'mon thom! that l-l close to kissing! but loveing this soo soo much! like wow! i cant wait for chapter 12! yayy |