Reviews for Yale?
FalafalafaPancakes chapter 13 . 7/1/2011
nice story, but next time, you need to carefully write out your plot. it has a lot of potential. i think the plot is good but the writing confuses me. make sure that when you write, you should write about the big picture and write the details later. other than this, i think the story is really good!
cheerleader115 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
1) you spelt Thalia wrong it's Thalia NOT Thaliah. 2) how do u NOT know WAT jasons last name is? Did u even read the lost hero cuz there is this big part about Jason and Thalia being siblings and it said his name was Jason Grace? Don't write if u don't know the facts!
Stygian.Wolf chapter 13 . 1/26/2011
hahah really percy really.. updatee
AchilliesOfGreece SILENTWALRUS chapter 12 . 1/25/2011
Ok, soooo...Percy is incincible...yet his heart stopped...and Annabeth is now a huge arrogant slut face/goddess of gayness? *SLITS WRISTS* You cant just skip a year into the future without letting the readers know, saying 'A year without her and this is how we meet" doesnt work out. Try again
AchilliesOfGreece SILENTWALRUS chapter 7 . 1/25/2011
and again, confused, and honestly, everyones tired of the whole athena pulling annabeth away from percy and annabeth falling for guy #2 10 seconds after sleeping with percy, and of course percy being a jealous asswipe that acts like a 4 year old as soon as he seas annabeth talking to anyone
AchilliesOfGreece SILENTWALRUS chapter 4 . 1/25/2011
sooooooooooo confused, give some history on them, annabeth comes back then the next day theyre jumping into bed with eachother?
Stygian.Wolf chapter 12 . 1/17/2011
i will sik da rat that keeps entering and leaving ma room on u if u dont update! so do it! ha ha just kidding. the rat entring and leaving part and the upating part i wasnt thoh. i need t know what will hapen 2 percy!
LOST HERO101 chapter 12 . 1/16/2011
don't let Percy die come on. Make Annabeth save him and then he sees her and talks to her or whatever.
productofanolympianorgy chapter 12 . 1/16/2011
ohmygods.! *stands up* *rubs butt* *facepalm* i can't believe i just fell off my chair!

you are so effin awesome. you should right more stories and keep UPDATING! this story is so great! can't stop reading it!
hellogabbymydear chapter 9 . 1/13/2011
That was awesome! Can't wait for some smoochie scenes! Nah, haha.
riri2015 chapter 3 . 1/12/2011
Ok that was great! and the first person is rachel and the second person is annabeth.
LOST HERO101 chapter 10 . 1/12/2011
is she gonna be a goddess or is she gonna kill herself or wat
speedyteeny chapter 3 . 1/8/2011
its battle of the labyrinth and its when Rachel Percy and Annabeth are in a café and rachel is brushing the gold out of her hair from being a statue

love ya story :D
Bmiester13 chapter 7 . 12/15/2010
So happy together by the turtles maybe
percyfan15 chapter 6 . 12/15/2010
You're story is great! I hope you can update soon! :D
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