| Reviews for The Lion's Pride |
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   Odie-San chapter 26 . 9/29/2024 Wow. Just... wow. Your take on this outlines the original. We'll done. |
| ExhaustedFFReader chapter 9 . 6/26/2024 I'm sorry, I've recently started reading this series and I've gotten so many much needed laughs and good feels from it. Thank you for writing this and sharing it with the world. |
| Loftybreeze chapter 21 . 4/8/2024 you already had snape teach them all sectumsempra daphne describes it as disgusting tho i think the other spell she mentioned is the more disgusting one the one that pees flesh like a banana |
| Loftybreeze chapter 8 . 4/8/2024 you did make a minor error in a previous harry states he cant imagine killing someone to moody you had him blow a death eater's head off via reducto between the eyes in the dom, he had at the point of the conversation with Moody already killed. |
| MakhaiArcanum chapter 21 . 2/10/2024 Hey, loving your story! Just wanted to let you know that you have a slight continuity error: You say here that Snape just now teaches Harry sectumsempra, but earlier you said he taught it (or at least demonstrated it) to all the teens on the island. |
| odonnellzoo99 chapter 17 . 10/22/2023 I’m sure this has been mentioned before, but the whiplash between Megan and Mandy being used as the name of the imperioused girl was distracting. Otherwise, a good chapter. |
| Something Random 52 chapter 21 . 9/12/2023 I did not need this image you bastard |
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/29/2023 I love this book but why did you have them get back together so soon it felt like harry breaking up with daphin wasn't as important as it should have been. |
| Hailfire27 chapter 18 . 8/15/2023 Noticed some issues with the names in this chapter and the last. Mandy Brocklehurst is dead, and Lisa Turpin and Megan Jones are the two ravenclaw girls involved in the necklace incident that killed Millicent, with Megan being imperiused, no? |
| csheila chapter 26 . 7/15/2023 Make it bloody when they destroy the Death Eaters. Not fair to you since they have been dropping |
| csheila chapter 22 . 7/15/2023 But now Nott knows. Damn |
| csheila chapter 21 . 7/15/2023 Idiots who dont ward their trunks I can’t imagine Moody didnt teach them |
| csheila chapter 17 . 7/15/2023 Hopefully, Hermione gets a clue. I was finished after Book 6, where her IQ dropped a hundred points. Poor Millie. But she had a great final year. Bastards |
| csheila chapter 14 . 7/15/2023 There is a great line in Orange is Not the Only Color by Jeanette Winterson: “Get off the Cross, honey, we could use the wood.” |
| csheila chapter 13 . 7/15/2023 Cry havoc and let slip the Weasely Twins |