Reviews for The Lion's Pride |
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csheila chapter 9 . 7/15/2023 Nice battle scene, even if faux |
csheila chapter 8 . 7/15/2023 Poor Ollivander and Mandy. Bloody times are coming |
csheila chapter 6 . 7/14/2023 Good on you, Harry. Do what you want for once |
csheila chapter 5 . 7/14/2023 Draco is unsalvageable post Third Year. Even that’s a stretch |
csheila chapter 4 . 7/14/2023 Well done, down to the embarrassment. But Sirius has to know no one gave him the talk. Ron would have remained likeable if she killed him in the OOTP; especially as a ghost. Great job |
csheila chapter 3 . 7/14/2023 Nice twist. Worried about muggleborns this summe. Not to mention Amelia |
csheila chapter 2 . 7/14/2023 Nice. But she should hav hexed them |
csheila chapter 1 . 7/14/2023 Get him, Daphne |
Just William chapter 8 . 6/24/2023 I have to say that the storyline is very good but there are many typo's/spelling errors/wrong words which, in my opinion spoil your stories. If you are going to write further stories please get someone to proof read them for you. |
Guest chapter 8 . 6/12/2023 Bones lost her entire family |
Dbg chapter 3 . 6/4/2023 It appeared that Snape came up just early enough for Harry to act on his suspicions and ,if he was willing to be obnoxious, make it much harder for for Dumble to hire Horace. |
Dbg chapter 1 . 6/4/2023 Well, I'm not sure if I should recind my rant about about Harry's presumption last chapter that him staying away from those he cared for would protect them , complain about the delay in Daphney deciding to set him straight, or shut up about it. The latter, is clearly the sensible choice. So sorry for the distraction |
Guest chapter 25 . 3/8/2023 I'm so angry that this was marked complete! |
pix25 chapter 26 . 2/11/2023 Brilliant story |
Don'tcarenomore chapter 26 . 12/27/2022 F*** Albus' "people have rights" policy! It's a PRIVATE g*******d school! "Show me your arm and I'll let you in" would be mine. Your ass ain't stepping foot in here if you got a snake tattoo! Portkeyed! Portkey! One word! JK Rowling mothef*ck**g CANON! What would a port key even BE?! A port doesn't need a key. A key to a port. "We're going boating. Grab the port key, or we'll be locked out"? |