Reviews for Naruto torture squad
libro5678 chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
kenking chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
hwoot woot woot woot woot woot! yeah good beginning
Anime Fan 295647 chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
Manga154 chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Can't wait to see the next chapter!
Beast-In-The-NorthEast chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
very good i liked it but can you hurry up and upload the chap :D
Dudtheman chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
felt rushed but im willing to hang around for more thanks for the read )
Umbra8191 chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
great chapter i can't wait for the next update.
LunarCatNinja chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Ha ha, this is going to be PERFECT! *You hear sudden minicial laughter in the background with shouts of how AWESOME it will be for SasUKE to get what's come'N to him*... DON"T call the nuthouse! Heh heh, sorry, I had to get that out of my system. LOL
Da-Crazy-Tiger chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
The overall feel of the story is rather shallow, no character depth at all, the story also moved too fast.

You should always capitalize and check your spellings, it shows that you care about your readers.

Grammar is key, even if you have a good plot, without grammar, it will be crap and no one will read it.

signed, crazytiger

PS: not a flame, this is called 'constructive criticism'. Heed this and you shall improve.
Volos chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
nice story. and sasuke ass whoopin is always welcomed. but it only going to 2 people in the harem or well there be some more added later in the future
UMMX chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Nice chapter the spacing was bad. "You can have periods in speech as long as the same person is talking. I thought you should know that."
Wolfreader3 chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
cant wait for the next chapter keep up the good work
Giratina Zero chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
An excellent story idea that I highly approve
summerss chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
like where this is going
Dark Insomniacs chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Sweet I love stories were Sasuke's gets his ass beat.
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