|Reviews for Kings & Queens|
| fan chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Hi, I know you wrote this set of stories two years ago but I wanted to give a review anyway.
The prequel to this story was really well written! So romantic!
I'm pretty upset that you made Vanessa out to be a detestable troll, because in this situation I've always felt that Vanessa was the better choice over Jenny for Nate. Nate doesn't suit the bitchy social climber at all and that's why he rejects Jenny every time. Nate's fundamental romantic issue has been finding a girl who is down to earth that challenges him to deal with issues and be a better guy but simultaneously can embrace his crazy world. You may think Vanessa is a total independent, judgmental bitch but she's actually been pretty cool and even at times had a sense of humor about the darker side to Nate (e.g his family issues and also when he slept with Catherine for money). The parts where you wrote in that she was sitting alone and glaring at everyone in the room made no sense. I have never seen Vanessa do that on the show. You made her out to be such a pouty bitch. Did you completely disregard the fact that when Jenny was busy making out with Nate, Vanessa still had deep feelings for him? She so did not steal Nate from Jenny, it's not that simple. Also, Blair and Chuck did something really cruel to her, and she didn't purposely tell Dan so he would ruin the Chair love confession in 2x08. She had no idea why Dan and Blair were hanging out. She was only confiding in her best friend something they had done that really upset and embarrassed her. It's your story and all, and I guess I see the Jenny/Nate spark. But I hope you won't compromise Vanessa's character and make her a total outcast who hates everybody and who everyone hates just because Nate dumps her for Jenny.
| Whatevergirl1985 chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
What ever happened to this story? You're a very talented writer, and I would love to see an update!
| blackheart4life chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
I'm kinda sad that nothing has been uploaded for this story, has it been abandoned?:(
It's like power play between these two. i kind of enjoy that Blair is a bit hesitant with Chuck. But it worries because she has always needed to be somewhat in control but idk. Chuck is something else ;).Chuck is sooo whipped! it's cute thou :).Chuck compliments balir so well because she does go naughty for him, n it's hot :).WTF is my reaction to the yale-alumni also. WTF! awww and this is where it ends. will there be more? please tell me there is )
| Crazyrebelscarfs chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Added to favorites
| A-SuperStar13 chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Great job, such a great way to start off this story. I love the way that Jenny is trying to get back Nate. The whole dynamic between Serena/Dan and Blair/Chuck is wonderful. I can feel the real tension between them.
| tvrox12 chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
I really like it!
I wonder what Blair is going to do to get Yale from Serena and Dan!
And I really liked the ending with Nate and Jenny!
Update Soon! :)
| CBBW3words8letters chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
Great chapter )
but I hate it when Serena gets the things Blair wants without even trying :S
I really hope Blair&Chuck can scheme and plot to get their way, he he :-)
| FuckMyLife1989 chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Loved your other story and I love the begining of this one. I cannot wait until you update again and let me no what is going to happen next to our favorite couple :D
| TriGemini chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
This sounds like a real good start.
Can't wait to find out, what happens next. So, until then.
| QueenBee10 chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Loved it so much!
| The Very Last Valkyrie chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Dear Mr. Santa,
I'm writing to say thank you for the lovely early Christmas present you got me. I put the Mistletoe Confessions sequel on my list and here it is, eleven days early! Even Amazon don't deliver that promptly (do you have anything to do with that, by the way?), so I just thought I ought to drop you a line to let you know how grateful I am.
They'll be mince pies for you in the usual place.
Well, Twisted Sister o' mine, what can I say? Firstly, thank you for the shout out. I will continue to be annoyingly vocal and vid-happy once we get into the plot a little more (and the trailer will have Just Tonight in the background and everything).
I love that you started straight in with the intrigue, and an interesting one at that: Chair versus Derena? That's like pitting Coco Chanel against a pair of hemp-woven clothing manufacturers. However, it does feel as if Serena might pose rather a problem for our dynamic duo. Don't trust a ho, B - grab your torch and pitchfork and go at the golden haired guppy! Speaking of blondes, look who's ready to rumble! In the words of Amanda Bynes, Jennifer, you should just 'grab him and just...just kiss the CRAP out of him!' Nate can only handle so much to-ing and fro-ing, he's not that smart. Show him some pretty pictures and he's yours.
The Chuck and Blair interaction was wonderful. It reminded me of season three, but the better parts - when they hold hands or kiss or scheme and still end up together in the end, because that's the way it's supposed to be. You captured them with such an innate sexy sweetness, and yet both still have spines of steel - brava!
I am unduly excited for that which is yet to come...even the angst.
Your Twisted Sister
| KelGGBel chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
YOU FINALLY POSTED! OMG OMG OMG!best early christmas present ever! please please update soon! B&C better. win. yale! serena's a dumb blonde, and dan, well dan and dartmouth just go better together, or brown even...