Reviews for Hold My Hand
Lord Asmodeus chapter 9 . 6/16/2014
I have no sympathy for your portrayal of Kyla...

God you could make it so she was raped by domestic animals, than tortured brutally, and still I wouldn't be able to feel anything for her...
Lord Asmodeus chapter 8 . 6/16/2014
Mhm, please don't tell me the child wasn't even Aidens...

Cause that would be taking the cherry from the cake made from mud!
Lord Asmodeus chapter 7 . 6/16/2014
Kyla is a bastard child as well?

God can I hate a character more than as of this moment?

Well, yes I can!
Lord Asmodeus chapter 4 . 6/16/2014
Kyla...

Is annoying...

But first impressions can change.
Bob chapter 8 . 11/26/2011
I've only read up through chapter 8. I really like the set up. The first few chapters were romantic but not overly so... pretty realistic stuff. Very sweet. I felt compelled to respond to this particular chapter because of this line: "his shirt was on inside out and he had on two different flip-flops." I find this extremely, extremely moving. It's very subtle but so true. Love Aiden in this story! (No easy task...) Off to read more.
rwayne chapter 15 . 9/3/2011
how awesome would it be if this story was updated?
Guest chapter 15 . 7/4/2011
this story is so good! i hope you update soon
HIMYMSON91 chapter 15 . 6/20/2011
Wow. 3 times. That's crazy...and scary. o.O

Great update. I rly love this.

Please post soon!
Elly1212 chapter 15 . 6/16/2011
OOOHHHH. YAY. Whats Ashley thinking? Please give us a glimpse soon! Great update!

Interesting chapter to say the least. I wasnt expecting Spencer to think of that but whatever floats ur boat I guess. Regardless loved those two and that you invite us to their intimacy. Please update as soon as you can.

-Elly
lilce1992 chapter 15 . 6/14/2011
Operation fuck up Kyla's rapist starting now. Pms
Guest chapter 15 . 6/14/2011
i love this! thanks for the update! please keep them coming
hugbuddy13 chapter 15 . 6/13/2011
what has ashley planned?

they really need to so something
imaferrari chapter 15 . 6/13/2011
OMG, you can write some seriously good sex scenes. I swear, they of the need-to-go-take-a-cold-shower variety! Despite the incredible hotness, though, I really enjoyed knowing that they were having some quality conversation during those in-between moments. I like how they are growing so much closer to each other.

Glad Sarah seems to be good for Alex. Now I'm wondering how they are going to set up the rapist.
Irishgrl33 chapter 15 . 6/13/2011
I hope she nails that jackass good.

Awesome upate!
2bz2breading chapter 15 . 6/12/2011
Okay, that was hot. Thanks for the update.
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