Reviews for Hostage of Love
djcarnation chapter 19 . 6/3
will u please continue this story .will b eagerly awaiting an update. thank you.
Guest chapter 19 . 12/5/2015
This hurt my head to read. While the technical side of the writing is solid. The way these characters behave is pathetic. If I knew people like this I would hit them in the head with a bat and tell them to grow the fuck up.
Guest chapter 17 . 12/4/2015
So now SAm and Leah are going to FORCE Jake to be around Bella. Jake would have ripped his head off. This is getting painfully bad. Not one of the better or even believable twifics. Kind of like Ragu. If there is trope or cliche or contrivance - Its in there. Almost like you read every bad twi story and put all the worst ideas in it.
Guest chapter 16 . 12/4/2015
Uhh this "story is all over the fucking place. It seems that Bella is forgetting that Jake tried to talk to her and explain. She simply wanted to believe it was all about her pain and would not listen to Jake. He TRIED to explain -you should remember that since you wrote it.. AS for being "friends" with Leah- Thats bullshit and another terribly unbelievable point in this trainwreck. These characters retain very little if any of the things about them that make them work in the twilight universe. Your Bella needs to be institutionalized and Jake needs to smacked in the head. There is simply no caring about or wanting good things for these people. Nothing to root for
Guest chapter 15 . 12/4/2015
THis has got to be the most pathetic version of Jake in all of this particular fandom. There is absolutely nothing sad or angsty about this story. This is Jacobs crush from when he was 15 years old. He never even had a real relationship with Bella in your world. Essentially what Jake is doing is what Bella did when Edward left. Stubbornly and selfishly thats not entirely correct. Determined NOT to let go or go through the process of getting over what was really a simple teenage infatuation. This makes Jacob a kind of male BellaAgain the behavior described isnt sad or angsty or heartbreaking a little kid who throws a tantrum when he doe not get what he wants or its own way. Its immature and its ugly.
Guest chapter 13 . 12/4/2015
Uhhg Maybe my reading comprehension is fucked up but Jake DID try and get Bella to stay and she sawed him off at the knees with out the slightest chance to say a word. Just the fact that Bella would make it ll about herself is a primary yet twisted character trait. Bella's delusional self pitying (another classic and disgusting feature of this character) makes it beyond difficult to want to see jake and her together. A winning scenario would be for Bella to get dead and Jake to realize that she is simply such a poor excuse for human, with such a twisted, hateful nature that even the densest of people would get that she is and will always be a trainwreck and destroy anything good that comes her way.
Guest chapter 11 . 12/4/2015
Difficult to write? Uhh its a story and not terribly original. Bella being a cluelss bitch? Its in there.
Jake as simpering little fool? Its in there...I could go on but you get the point and its all so done before. Angst for angst sake. The problem is they just are boring and not terribly believable.
Guest chapter 9 . 12/4/2015
Gimme a freakin break already...This really really bad. nobody acts like this although I guess Jake ougta get a little for all the shit Bellabitch put him through. But with Bella the price of a piece of ass could be quite expensive...I want to like this story but Jacobs instant and frankly unrealistic forgivness for Bella all because he wants to get laid is simply not believable.
Guest chapter 8 . 12/3/2015
Trust you? If Bella is not going to get hit by a bus or Eddie is not gonna show up and rip her head off.. This story aint going to have an ending thats worthy of anything. Bella fucks Jake over repeatedly and all Jake can think of is to throw himself under the bus and get hit by every wheel. That was never Jake. And Jake as getting sucked in every time Bella squirts a few is simply not worth reading sbout.
Guest chapter 7 . 12/3/2015
She still loved Edward? Afdter all thye abuse and a near rape? Thats just fucking STOOOPID.
Only a fucking moron of a writer could come up with this concept. One secvond the writer has Bella deathly afraid and suffiring the worst sort of manipulation and almost being raped by her wlking dead body and the next second she still "loves" him. Is that supposed to be clever or angsty? That takes a twisted sort of mind. You should think about that. Anyway there is one in this trainwreck that is worth rooting for. No one
Guest chapter 5 . 12/3/2015
His is quite the ugly little story as Bella is quite the ugly little person. My only wish is that Eddie would be true to his nature and rip her head off. Then every body gets the happy ending.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2015
You make the choice and you pay the price. Its hard to have much sympathy for either one in this story. Bella decided to worship at the alter of death so she could have an existence free of risk or chances. A coward unable to fathom having to live life on its own terms. As for Jake what kind of idiot especially considering that Jake with his greek god looks and sunny nature would have had all kinds of options all kinds of buetiful women throwing themselves at him throws their life away because of a failed romance when they where 16 years old? The answer is...NOBODY does that! In essence what this Jake is is a male version of Bella.
Aunt Bran chapter 2 . 9/13/2015
LOL - "stick his icy cock into his stupid bride" says it all! Love it :) Heading over to TR so I don't miss a thing!
Anony chapter 19 . 4/15/2015
Can't wait for the next chapter!
corkykellems chapter 19 . 4/10/2015
Love is in the these to work it out
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