Reviews for The First Adventure
gandalf chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
The Doctor has, in the past, said a great deal about what happens if things don't work out.
Illucida chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Lovely work! I enjoyed this quite a bit. I'd like to read more, should you write more adventures.
KelinciHutan chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
This is a short piece, but it packs a lot of punch. You've got really great visual details and I felt almost like I was watching this story rather than reading it. Good job on this.
Psychedelica chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
Wow, that was really good!

Seriously, guys? TWO reviews? TWO? You're kidding! That was AMAZING! I love your writing style; you totally get into Reid's head! (p.s. Reid rocks!)
OrionTheHunter chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
This was fun. Thanks for writing.
Velveteenrabbit chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Oh god I wanna see Hotch, Rossi, and Jack harkness cuz all of them in one room (TARDIS) would be Epically hilarious