This was so fluffy! I laughed, I cried, I even squealed a bit. I absolutely adored this story! It truly was beautifully written.

*quiet sobbing intensifies in the background* I don't even LIKE Twilight, but, by god, I love me some Jasbella!

Good and interesting Story.

I was looking for things to read, and I've read some of your other pieces, mainly in the Avengers realm, and I just started scrolling through your stories, looking for something interesting. Unfortunately, I haven't seen most of the shows you write on, but this story looked intriguing. You're a pretty good writer. I've actually got a list of links to your stories set up. I can't wait to read them all!

Absolutely loved this story

I am so in love with this story! I have always disliked Edward's coercive nature, and this finds Bella the most wonderful, understanding partner. :) it is so well written, I'm now moving onto all your other stories! Xx

Did anybody else read Bella Whitlock? Instead of both Whitlock

Holy shit.

My heart was just viciously ripped from my chest.

I really needed to go to bed hours ago but I just couldn't stop reading. I've read this one before, ages ago, and I remembered I liked it but I didn't remember the depth of feeling. I've laughed and had to get up and walk around with a stupid smile on my face from feeling giddy and excited. I'm pretty sure I blushed reading the poem bits. ...and the ending has me in tears. Both happy and sad. I absolutely loved the bittersweet moments with Charlie and I adored the longing and happiness the epilogue gives me. Thank you for this. It's just as special now as it was the first time I read it.

Oh! I also loved the little historical tidbits in the footnotes. That was a lovely additional touch.

I love that Arkansas got mentioned! I'm from Arkansas and I never see it in any books. The first time I did was in the Sookie Stackhouse novels (and they were evil in that book :'( ). Thank you for making my day!

Without a doubt my favourite BellaxJasper story, so honest and passionate yet loving, I adore it. I can't believe how you were able to be so historically accurate and true to the characters. I was smiling and in tears, you're so good at this! Thank you for bringing this content to us, I admire all the writers who are dedicated enough to devote their time to these stories. You're the best!

Such a beautiful and original story. I am so glad that you shared this with us.

Wow. I think I might have loved your historical facts as much as the story thus far.

I enjoyed your wonderful story and thank you for sharing it.