|Reviews for Romantic Storm|
| AquilaTempestas chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Yay a new beyblade writer :)
Welcome to the fandom!
Now onto the actual review...
I like the fact you've used Ozuma and Joseph. Not many people write stories based on the Saint Shields so this was refreshing.
My main issue is this:
"Thunderstorm I presume", Mariam suggested. Don't have the comma outside the apostrophes, should be inside (applies for other dialogue parts to) But other than that small issue... I'm happy :)
Looking forward to reading more about the Saint Shields!