Reviews for A Bedtime Story
Alexandra chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
I KNEW IT WAS SOUTA! I took like fifty are you smarter than me quizzes and they couldn't trick me!
Thorn In Your Side chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
I figured it out at the third line :3 Do I get a prize?

The italics/ simple script works, but the entry of the mother's dialogue throws it off balance a little. I would've suggested putting that in quotes~~~

Nothing FANTASTIQUE HOMG HART but not bad at all~
Toto Owns You chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Good job. Guessed about 1/2 way thru.
Sydney.State.Of.Mind chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Ah I feel so special I guessed it yay! Anyway this was really really good, I feel so bad for Sota, he always looked up to Kagome so much :( Great job!
movedto-theycallmeruthless chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
PitaPita08 chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
awww that was sad ):

i could tell it was going to be Souta though because he kept talking about Kagome and stuff but i never really though about how she left them and how it must be sad to loose your sister and stuff.