Reviews for Zero's Shock
Anon chapter 14 . 8/23
Are you telling me that the wrench I spent the whole game smacking people with could have exploded at any time?
Veir chapter 1 . 8/18
Why the hell would someone that has spent the last however long in a hell hole like Rapture ever let down his guard?!
To the point of allowing someone to grab and kiss him even!
Doomeater chapter 7 . 8/6
Hey man, great job as always! Keep up the good work.
I have a question, I'm planning on writing my first every Fanfiction, it's a Fate Zero(stay night)/Familiar of Zero crossover. Any advice on how to keep it long? I'm not too sure on to have it at a decent length. Any advice would be a great help. Thanks
thepkrmgc chapter 14 . 7/14
its a shame this wasnt continued, its really quite an interesting tale
thepkrmgc chapter 13 . 7/14
hopefully they can send jack some dakka, a well placed bullet would have solved the whole battle without much fuss
thepkrmgc chapter 12 . 7/14
jack's powers arent without their weaknesses: a smart enough opponent can turn them against him
thepkrmgc chapter 11 . 7/14
you really have to pity louse for having to see some of those memories, i wonder how derflinger will compare to jack's trusty wrench?
thepkrmgc chapter 10 . 7/14
seeing the effects of jack's PTSD from the outside must be quite terrifying, but nowhere near what its like for him
thepkrmgc chapter 9 . 7/14
kirches reaction to jacks obliviousness is bound to be amusing, gene modding aside he cant be much more than 5 years old
thepkrmgc chapter 8 . 7/14
i suppose that living in a post apocaliptic underwater hellhole leaves ones palate with a lot to be desired, one might even say that his first taste of real food was positively rapturous
thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 7/14
great job on jack's characterization, perhaphs the most extrordinary thing about him is how ordinary he appears. that not only did he triumph over god and king alike but he did so without joining their ranks
thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 7/14
dang, jack can be legitly terrifying when he wants to be
thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 7/14
its odd to think that jack is younger than his "little sisters", and when you consider that he's spent all but his whole life in rapture its no surpised he's so emotionally stunted. guiche is probably going to have his head bashed in though, the undercity had no place for honor
thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 7/14
I wonder where jack ended up on the ideological side of things, his father would have stopped at nothing to tear down the aristocracy but jack seems to take a more populist view
thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 7/14
i wonder whats with jacks adverse reaction to magic, hopefully the evacuation can continue without him!
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