|Reviews for In Flight|
| Lazy Servant chapter 44 . 11/3
Thanks for the chapters.
Sorry, cant think in better words.
| tank2u1wood chapter 44 . 10/16
Thank you for this story author, I enjoyed immensely. Laughing, crying, and everything in between; the sole regret being that I didn't get more of the after math, seo, uzume, matsu, and all the others. I wish I could have but this is probably for the better, thank you again.
This story is complex, it mixes type-moon Canon with Sekirei Canon quite spectacularly, Shirou is a good character who isn't overpowered at the start but has grown from a 17 year old with next to no skills, and by the end is incredible. The Villian is complex and 3 dimensional twists that I didn't forsee and character developments that I couldn't predict lead to a roller coaster of emotions, humor, romance, anger, and many other emotional queues are well handled. Minor spelling issues are really the only apparent downside, apart from fandoms raging over how things turn out I'm sure. Even if you end up hating it at the end, or as is more likely immensely enjoying the story and it's development. I can 100% recommend this even now
| TheSlySage chapter 44 . 9/17
beautiful. open ending on Miya potentially joining. kinda wish more than just Kuu and Shirou were in the ending would have enjoyed some dialogue with all the ladies lol
| shernum16 chapter 44 . 9/14
That was pretty good.
The comedy was a strong point, but the absolute best part, I think, is the depiction of Shirou - especially the scene where he “breaks up” with Rin and Saber.
That being said, the final fight was super lackluster, and the ending, while it had some good bits, like all the Notes references, was a bit disappointing in how little it actually showed. It felt like a description, like someone just listing out factoids.
But in general, despite the ending, this fic was really good. One of the best Fate docs out there - and completed, to boot! That never happens!
| TheSlySage chapter 35 . 9/14
Shirou breaking/blocking the hannya mask and Miya's pouting about it is soooo damn adorable. I doubt she gets winged as I read your Shirou/Miya story... but she would have totally fit to be winged as well. I think her and Karasuba would have fit perfectly
| jaimehuizar2005 chapter 44 . 9/8
i finally finished it this is around my fift time seeing I I got upto hearing a Spanish test on YouTube getting around chap 17 came back to the website got to chap 40 finally mand up back with the app and ended it and it is satisfying
| mouseannnymous chapter 44 . 9/8
Man this was a good run while it lasted, thanks for giving us the masterpiece even after years new readers like me enjoy it.
| MoltenNeko chapter 25 . 8/27
I find it funny that people are getting mad that shirou killed the fragarch user. It's clearly not bazett since y'know she's ALREADY DEAD. Kirei killed her for Lancer during the 5th hgw
| Guest chapter 24 . 8/3
what an awful chapter. shitty way to do it
| ArashiNokitsune chapter 44 . 7/11
this was a great read although yukari taking a similar Life Style to how Archer "Shirou" does sound like something very concerning so good luck on saving her when she gets backstabbed but still I wonder how Shirou really explain things with his biological family Considering that really all all that happened was pretty much a long investment in Minaka turning Shiro into an entity that is equivalent to the heroes of Legend makes me wonder what he actually did was essentially convert Shiro and his flock into some form of pseudo-variation of a heroic spirit... that being said I hope his little sister comes to that kind of understanding that all the events that happen was essentially the father turning the son into a long-term experiment using a lot of people in scenarios, but if she wants to follow the path of a hero like her brother and try to out do him... good luck, just hope it doesn't been bad for her like it would have her brother had it not have for the time-travel aspect for a counter Guardian
| dukkeh216 chapter 23 . 7/1
Well as much as I liked this story initially I think this is as far as will go with it. I really hate reading stories about guy being surrounded by flock of very willing women that basically has " *time skip*... oh yeah, during that time skip we had sex". Besides that I think this story might have been better if instead of all that london escape bullshittery Zelretch just grabbed Emiya and yoinked him into Sekirei worldline (if you can even call it that way), not a huge fan of all that drama and if it actually happened.. well this could be an actual story about Emiya living in this world, not just staying in Shin Tokyo because conveniently other magicians haven't found him there yet...
To anyone who might read this review before deciding to read this fanfic: If you came here expecting OP Shirou Emiya faceslapping people and getting these juicy lemons with very willing and busty aliens you will get extremely dissapointed, but the comedy aspects of this fic were kinda worth it until the dynamic between just way too many residents of Izumo Inn started to get annoying.
| NoSchittSherlock chapter 1 . 7/1
This story still holds up after all these years.
I don't suppose if you've read Xolef's Fear The Superhero? I beta it for him, and as someone heavily inspired by this fic, I think he'd love to hear your thoughts about it - positive or negative - if you have any. Would love to hear from you!
| dukkeh216 chapter 4 . 6/30
Damm I hope he will fight someone at some point because otherwise it will be pretty boring.
| Guest chapter 44 . 6/27
Even now, this remains the top of its category. A wonderful reread.
| 1.6180339887498948482045868 chapter 44 . 6/26
What a spectacular story. Honestly, I've never seen/read/played Fate or Sekirei. I only know about fate from the numerous fanfictions and crossovers that I've read about it. This is my first time crossing into the world of Sekirei. This led me to go read up on lore for both fate and sekirei. I think you did a tremendous job blending the worlds together. I honestly was gripped from start to finish. Sure, there were some runnings gags that felt kind of old, but those were "in-universe" for sekirei so there's not much to say about that. I loved how the romance went. I think they would all make wonderful mothers, Shirou's flock. Except for Karasuba. Not that she'd be a bad mother, I just don't think she would care to be one. I remember thinking towards the end, "happened to that one guy, who had a crush on Homura at the beginning?" And then you randomly brought him back for a cameo lol. Loved that. And then I was remember thinking at some point, "Has Shirou's father been mentioned at all? Did I miss that somewhere?" LOL I should have seen that reveal coming. I also loved Akitsu's story. I loved that Shirou found a way to wing her. I'm sad to see this story end. Now, I guess it's time to go finish a hill of swords, and then I'll just read the rest of your fics one by one lol.