Like always you ruin your stories by writing in First Person POV.

Aah, still love this fic! Just reread the whole thing, what an absolute delight! Thank you so much for writing and sharing!

I can confirm that finding out that there exists porn of you is a very uncomfortable experience.

When I read the first sentence “It had a two on it”.
My first thought was ‘Oh god, its a dragon ball’.

I first read this when it was first completed, I liked it then and I loved it now. Bo real criticism except I wish it had been longer and that you had included Uzume in your epilogue; seems like she was just forgotten but Waver wasn't lol. Either way a fantastic read and I recommend it to anyone even if you hardly know anything of Sekirei or Fate/Stay Night.

Gotta say, I was skeptical at first but that was freaking glorious.

This last couple of chapters made me realize I can't stand Shirou when he's written too seriously and paranoid I guess this is the reason most people write him only during the Grail War, as the idealist Fate route Shirou or change his character enough so he doesn't end up devolving into a paranoid asshole.
His worries make sense for the universe but he's so jaded and vehemently against trusting people that he's just unlikeable there's vestiges of the character I like a lot in there but it's overshadowed by his constant paranoia regarding the Mage's Association. I'm reading this because of my inability to leave stories half read but unless there's a major development with Shirou pulling the paranoic stick out his ass and using it to beat Minaka and the Magi trying to ruin his life to death with it this will be a story I never revisit again.

I'm getting really tired of Shirous flighty attitude regardless of what the clock tower does him refusing to stand his ground when he has an army's worth of superpowered women around is annoying, yes to his eyes they are childish and maybe not as powerful as he would like but that's because he is vehemently not being proactive in making sure they are ready. Dude face it you're essentially soul bound to these ladies but up and take responsibility by making sure they are ready to defend themselves and each other from external threats.

While I'm fine with the whole hiding magic from the general population hiding his abilities to fight from allies is absolutely stupid on the highest level.

norito dorito

Decent chapter. Things are coming to a head and all.
I do wonder why Rin didn’t just outright say “Minaka’s the owner” instead of being vague.
The plan itself is interesting. A lot like the HGW, in the part of the plan of following the HS back to the throne by using the gathered energy. But instead, Minaka tries to destroy the world to provoke the CF and CGs so he can use their path. An interesting scheme, and one that cleverly uses the plots and settings of the original sources.
The character moments were also pretty good. You can definately feel the struggle in working with such a large cast, but no one too severely suffers from it.

I liked this more than I expected.
The fight was decent if a bit silly. But the conclusion was pretty emotional, satisfying, and somewhat reasonable.
The scene with Kiritsugu in particular was good. Definately something that had a lot of narrative weight.
Same with the aftermath. Although the Kazehane part kinda came (heh) out of nowhere.

And they immediately explained it a little bit further

Sabers situation is unique due to her not being summoned by the throne of heroes but right before her death so it allowed her to be summoned in both the 4th and 5th holy grail war while if she was summoned by the throne of heroes she would only be summoned in the 5th holy grail war not the 4th

Things are picking up. Once again, I’m getting the Impression you are trying to get from A to B, hitting some specific points along the way, and doing various methods to handle the in-between parts. With differing levels of quality and success.
But the start of the Rin and Saber Arc had more parts that were actual higher quality, in my opinion, than other works, yours or otherwise. Some of the banter was funny. Some of the emotionally tense scenes were legit. Some of the characterizing interactions were written well. A solid few chapters. Even if I can tell that this arc is likely divisive for many reasons.