|Reviews for In Flight|
| RyTheGuy chapter 24 . 10/21
This Shirou does a lot of talking big and not backing it up. He has all these "plans" or threats that he doesnt carry out. He is kinda a doormat for most things
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/19
Absolute bull, Shirou would just kill them, than ask questions, he is, after all, the Sword of Justice, he doesn't have to explain anything.
| Just a bored Highschooler chapter 3 . 10/3
Why are you afraid of the very thing that makes you, Shirou?
| Yggdrasil09 chapter 27 . 9/30
You know, I just realized something. Shirō is one of two red heads that can pay of favors with his cooking.
| DaDragon562 chapter 44 . 9/28
This epilogue was just absolutely perfect
I loved every bit of this story
It was so well written, the plot has few holes, makes sense,and is immensely entertaining while still having elements of so many different conflicts and characters developing and being fleshed out each given their own personalities and identities that aren't subsumed just for plot reasons
I really love the idea that minaka was doing this to truly revive humanity's strength and ensure survival in the future, it is such an interesting altruistic view that makes sense given he admired kiritsugu in the past
The interactions with ORT, the clock tower, and shirou just being like a demi god is great, as is that hint of tension with miya
I binge read this in like three days but it was soooooo satisfying, i gotta read your miya one shot and the hill of swords story too
| DaDragon562 chapter 43 . 9/28
God damn, that was interesting
And fuck Minaka for putting a dead mans switch into it, if they didnt do the reality marble beforehand the jinki wouldve activated everything
| DaDragon562 chapter 42 . 9/28
Lmfao at the ending
The Minaka reveal was interesting, I'd already been wondering earlier in the story if Minaka was in fact a magus given shirou has magic circuits in a surprisingly large quantity despite not having known magus heritage, the magical interference preventing sekirei detection, the adjustment to what was basically magic circuits and their crests, along with all the references to age of the gods and being insane scientist
Glad to see it confirmed though the magnitude of what exactly he is trying is quite terrifying and really puts a serious note on the sekirei plan and what its purpose is.
You can almost even describe it as a way of determining how likely the odds of success for reaching the root are for minaka because if the counter force does bring a serious threat forward, its validation he is likely to reach the root if he proceeds.
Really interesting twists, I can't wait for the final confrontation with Karasuba and Minaka
| DaDragon562 chapter 41 . 9/28
This was a beautiful chapter
The fighta nd brutality of Shirou vs Saber
The ruthlessness with which Rin got Shirou with gandr curse bolts
Shirou himself geassing rin
Then meeting karasuba and making his way back
I loved the realization with Kazehana at the end and how everything worked out honestly, it was very well done in my opinion
| DaDragon562 chapter 40 . 9/28
God damn this was really well written out, both Rin's plan, her decision to not eve inform Shirou, Shirou calling them out, and then finding the loophole which is kind of insane for a single third rate Magus to beat a top tier magus and an A ranked heroic spirit with a noble phantasm
| DaDragon562 chapter 36 . 9/28
Dayum, mind of steel shirou can come into play it seems now and then
| andrewtaylorapt37 chapter 31 . 9/28
Homura "Do you get pleasure from destroying my preconceptions? What's next, Hercules or something?"
Me "About that."
| A Wandering Stranger chapter 44 . 9/28
I don't think I have the words to describe this. It was one hell of a ride. Such an old story, too! Man, you are one of the real classics of this site, aren't you? What an insane writer you are.
| DaDragon562 chapter 32 . 9/27
What a hilarious chapter. I'm surprised Shirou got off so easily from Miya for effectively finally giving into his beastly urges and fucking Musubi in her sleep
| DaDragon562 chapter 27 . 9/26
Oh shit, is Karasuba gonna end up killing Uzume?
| DaDragon562 chapter 26 . 9/25
Loved the conviction from all involved as well as their bonding together