Reviews for In Flight
Senju Serena chapter 40 . 5/18/2014
I have to say this...but even though this is a serious chapter with not much jokes...this is my favorite chapter of them all
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 44 . 5/12/2014
there's not much i can say other than "What a great story this turned out to be. From start to end it took me about 3days to read. Great job and thank you for the fun ride you took me on"
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 36 . 5/11/2014
nice, glad to see that he sticks with his convictions and doesn't go against them even when it is his sister involved..
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 33 . 5/11/2014
hmmm, not sure if Sekirei would be able to be Magi... as they seem to either use Prana differently to humans or they dont have it themselves
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 30 . 5/11/2014
well, i think it was pretty stupid not to eliminate Kouchu when he had the chance
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 18 . 5/9/2014
the idea that Musubi might get/develop a Reality Marble is stupid and i really hope you dont do it... there are so many things that would just make it near impossible for her to develop one and it would likely come off as just a Deus Ex Machina
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 8 . 5/9/2014
hehehe, nice chapter... hmm, wonder if Miya will eventually be winged... would be cool
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 3 . 5/8/2014
i love Akitsu, she is tha best... "Ah...i forgot"

Yukari is ok as long as she is only showing up in small dosses, i dont think i could stand her if she is in this alot
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 2 . 5/8/2014
yay, it seems that your not going to stick to Minato's Serikei and will either add a few new ones (even if it is just Akizu, as she 1 of my fav) into the mix... i was a little worried that he would just have the same

enjoying this so far, although for someone who spent 2years in a relationship with 2 girls (that i assume was sexual) he gets embarrassed a little easy
Flightfling chapter 44 . 5/6/2014
Thanks for all your hard work, sweat, blood, and hand cramps writing this story. I enjoyed this immensely. The ending was a nice change of pace that really makes it seem like the ending it should have been. I especially like that Rin was able to break the gease since I was really torn about that.

Can't wait to see what you do in the future.

Follower for life
Jarl of the North chapter 44 . 5/4/2014
... There is only one thing to say to this. I. Love. This. Story. It was amazing. That's all I can really say about this. With the exception of the occasional typo, there was nothing that could possibly detract from this story in any way. I wish you the best of luck in the future, my fine fellow, and look forwards to seeing more of your work.

Jarl of the North
TripOverFlatSurfaces chapter 44 . 5/3/2014
It's hard to explain, but I think I really dislike your endings. It was the same with Hill of Swords. It's not a particularly concrete feeling, just a general sense of dissatisfaction? Perhaps, I simply dislike the "epilogue" format, that a story can be so neatly wrapped up and just conclude. I know that there's the implication of life continuing on, and yet the story has a conclusion. Ah, whatever, nevertheless, your writing is fantastic as always! I always find it awfully hard to stop reading in the middle of your fics, even if finishing them in one go takes an indecent amount of time. Thank you very much for sharing! 3333
1ss chapter 38 . 4/29/2014
Uriel7 chapter 44 . 4/28/2014
I keep on going through your story - this is my fourth or fifth time reading it all the way through, and I can't believe that I am just now getting a lot of the foreshadowing you put in your early chapters, especially about MBI and Minaka being a magus. If one of the hallmarks of a good work is how many times you can reread it and still get something new out of it, then you have certainly written a very good work. Thanks and keep writing!
Acaykath chapter 44 . 4/28/2014
Great story... I'll probably be spending a while going through your other works because of this one. I loved the internet is for porn gag... I am not sure if that was in the original or you just took that from the song but it really added a lightness that helped break up the seriousness that would have eventually made a story of this length too heavy without something to relax the reader every once in a while. You also really integrated the two worlds rather nicely and I learned a lot about the fate magic system from Emiya's explanations that got lost in other authors attempts, though I still don't know the difference between mana and prana *sigh*.
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