Reviews for In Flight
thepkrmgc chapter 24 . 2/20
dang things just got serious, but you do a great job writing this dramatic scene: while he's been hiding it well shirou's got oodles of PTSD weighing him down. i wonder if anyone made the connection between his reveal about rin and saber and this one
thepkrmgc chapter 23 . 2/20
props to matsu for uncovering some deeply buried secrets, and akitsu for acheiving her hearts desire, i wonder how her personality will change now that her worst shame/fear is gone
thepkrmgc chapter 22 . 2/19
so thats how the split happened, i suspect that rins influence is whats keeping the enforcers away
thepkrmgc chapter 21 . 2/19
while narrative prevents an escape from the plan, at least its not because the protagonists are too stupid to try
thepkrmgc chapter 20 . 2/19
it probably says something about me that i find shiroe's intimidation skills hilarious...
thepkrmgc chapter 18 . 2/19
musubi might seem shallow and airheaded on the surface, but you do a great job of showing how theres an ocean of hope and kindness underneath
thepkrmgc chapter 17 . 2/19
you do the battles well, its a shame that shiroe and co cant bug out now
thepkrmgc chapter 16 . 2/19
while its good that shiroe got a chance to get settled, it wouldnt due for such things to last, and if its rin or saber they should complicate things further
thepkrmgc chapter 15 . 2/19
the family drama went surprisingly well, i wonder what they will think of magic if/when they find out
thepkrmgc chapter 14 . 2/19
while shiroeshould have just killed the other ashikabi from the start he certainly knows how to pull off quite the intimidating presence
thepkrmgc chapter 13 . 2/19
i wonder how shiroe will explain things to his sister when he barely understands them himself
thepkrmgc chapter 12 . 2/19
i can totally understand why shiroe was upset, and while i doubt i would forgive/process things as easily in his place such things are the perrogative of heroes of justice
thepkrmgc chapter 11 . 2/19
so he finally caught on, I pity him when rin and saber find out
thepkrmgc chapter 10 . 2/19
its good that shirou knows that knowledge is power, though he isnt lacking in its other respects
thepkrmgc chapter 9 . 2/19
it seems like I tend not to like harems but shirous certainly being a gentleman
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