| Reviews for In Flight |
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   Noreen I-shi chapter 25 . 5/6/2022 Fck, it's really SUPER EPIC! The battle scene really improve from before, thanks for your hard work! |
| Noreen I-shi chapter 24 . 5/6/2022 Yeah like my comment before, i really hate shirou's action for not shutting Matsu's mouth, and if he wouldn't at least why he tell the others his secrets? God, really got me nerves But in the last chap, shirou's punishment make my angry little placate |
| Noreen I-shi chapter 24 . 5/6/2022 I really hate shirou's action here, why the fck he shut his fcking mouth up, can't he just grab Matsu dan bring to her room instead? |
| Purifies Miracles chapter 44 . 5/6/2022 Matsu boinking doko? |
| Purifies Miracles chapter 23 . 5/3/2022 I'm glad you kept the Haruka bits in. Wouldn't hurt to learn about the boys once in a while or more than often. |
| JManM chapter 10 . 4/8/2022 It took me a while to realize why this story bored me so much despite the solid character work. At first I thought the pacing slipped to indulgent, but that wasn't quite right. Then I started analysing the big block paragraphs and realized that they were full of passive word choices. Frequent use of was and has and had caused the sentences in your meatier paragraphs to stale. The problem did not occur in the dialogue sections I checked. |
| NTMkensei03 chapter 44 . 4/3/2022 A classic, while it has it flaw (edgy Shirou but still not as bad as Hill of Sword's Shirou who would definitely make Kiritsugu, EMIYA Archer and OG Shirou cringe and want to eliminate from existence, fanon of Magic system and lore, some weird sex humor, etc...) it still really enjoyable and worth re-reading, 7 out of 10 story. |
| Guest chapter 44 . 3/31/2022 Rereading so many years later, it's still a great work! |
| Dasgun chapter 1 . 3/23/2022 ... |
| JaphetSkie chapter 44 . 3/2/2022 Story is good, but I still hate it for being one of the main propagators of a bunch of fanon bullshit. |
| nanashihaisha chapter 44 . 2/17/2022 This was an Amazing story! |
| Hindsight chapter 25 . 2/10/2022 Well, we finally have confirmation. Fragarach can not in fact counter Fragarach. |
| bekfastandmilk chapter 22 . 2/8/2022 saber |
| TheSlySage chapter 1 . 2/6/2022 hahahahahahahahhahaha this is epicccccc |
| TheLostArchivist chapter 44 . 1/15/2022 It has taken me a long time to read this in its entirety, but I don't regret it. I like the fact that there's hope in the ending and that even Minaka got a moment of redemption (albeit in the typical manner of a redeemed villain). I still think this needs one final chapter regarding Shirou and Miya (they totally like each other) but it's otherwise perfect. :D |