Reviews for In Flight
Rankin de Merthyr chapter 8 . 4/22
A shame the Author is MIA. Though the fic is complete, I would have liked reading more fics of his as the writing is good and flows easily.
Rankin de Merthyr chapter 1 . 4/21
Ha! GAAAAAY!
FL chapter 1 . 4/21
Many years have passed. I've come back to reread one of my all-time favorite fanfics. I feel so emotional right now...!
DarienMorningstar chapter 44 . 4/11
great job
jzhang311 chapter 44 . 4/8
Holy shit, this is beautifully written, I can really appreciate the humor you effortlessly insert into this fic. The best sekirei story I've read, by far.
CrimsonMystic chapter 28 . 4/5
In the Nasuverse the first sorcery was Denial of Nothingness, the ability to create something from nothing, and either the fourth or fifth was the Blue, manipulation of time. No idea about the other
Cypher chapter 44 . 3/29
Your story's are beautiful even more so when extended into many chapters and your knack for endings that leave us all both satisfied yet wanting more I believe that if you made an original story it would be a bestseller and everyone would know your name so please I encourage you to write more and to be as awesome as all of your story's have ever been

- Cypher Celesete Arcadia
becauseno chapter 1 . 3/25
well someones not happy...
Luna's Meow chapter 41 . 3/20
This is where it breaks down further. Even YOU know that Rin and Saber would possibly share. Because you say so in the very next bit after the fight at the park! And so, you ended up having them apart for... what? Convenience? So you didn't need to write two more FATE characters and deal with fans angry at their portrayal? Plot? You just wanted the drama of them leaving? Anger? Tired of all the ero-plots where everyone just falls into bed together like you said in the story? Either way, you completely ignored that actual character of both Rin and Saber.
Luna's Meow chapter 40 . 3/20
Have to agree with the other reviewer here. Rin has her pride. But Saber? For a person who likes her (I don't) you don't seem to understand her. Saber... is distorted like Shirou. Being King never gave Saber pride. It was just something she did to save her land. A job. Even her single minded focus on winning the Grail to wish that someone better had become King was about that. Saving her land. It is why she and Shirou are so compatible. It is also why I don't like her. A Shirou with Saber (without Rin) is a Shirou who becomes Archer. Because she lives his ideals. Saber is the one who truly walked "The Path of the Shura". She cannibalized her own lands to stop the hordes. The few for the many indeed. Yet Saber gave up her wish for Shirou. Saber, is what Shirou woukd be if his distortion was fixed. Saber valued Shirou more than her desire to save Britain. And her desire to save Britain was so great that she got the chance to make a deal with Alaya for it. Something Shirou also got. That says a lot. Saber would accept anything for Shirou. Even sharing him. Rin is the one who would only share him with Saber, and only that because of the circumstances. You did Saber a HUGE disservice here. And even Rin, might, MIGHT, be willing to accept the flock over time. Nkt right away for sure though, and only if the right circumstances came up to cause her to bond with them herself. (Not a Sekirei bond, just a normal bond.) After all, she has a precedent for putting aside her pride. She knew that Shirou would choose Saber over her in the Good ending, which is why she shared. She knew that she was second place in Shirou's heart. Yet she still kept Saber at cost to her own prana reserves, even though she didn't love Saber. She loved Shirou that much. So while it isn't LIKELY that she would just join the harem, the possibility exists. Seriously though, for someone who generally is good at characterization, you failed pretty spectacularly on Saber considering that you like her, and also on Rin's motivations for not joining being only her pride considering the hit her pride takes at keeping Saber around while knowing that she herself is just second best.
Luna's Meow chapter 20 . 3/17
Hmmm, Shirou has SOME experience giving orsers to a partner. Saber. Command Seals. He isn't USED to it by any stetch of the word, but since Saber still considered him her Master even when contracted to Rin... he probably still gives SOME orders. Probably just in combat though, which is where the strangeness comes in now. Out of combat orders.
Luna's Meow chapter 11 . 3/17
The Internet is for Porn. Funny that I didn't get that reference before.
Luna's Meow chapter 1 . 3/13
I think the problem FSN people ave with Saber is that she isn't complete. Rin can carry a story all on her own. So could Ilya. Sakura and Saber? No. They are side characters. Sakura doesn't get interesting until she goes crazy, and Saber doesn't get interesting until she becomes Dark Saber. They are simply BORING characters without their evil sides. The problem is that Nasu made them complete within Fate, but that completeness includes all their possibilites, all their versions. And only Rin is complete enough to carry a fic without being twisted. Try writing Saber as she is? She just has one priority. Protect Shirou. No goals of her own. Her one goal gets removed after all. Sakura? Be near Shirou. No goals of her own. Rin has GOALS, drive, needs. She is a person. Which is why the others can only exist as satelite girls for Shirou.
River king chapter 44 . 3/12
;)
EvilDragonMuspelheim chapter 1 . 3/9
I guess I'm reading this again...
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