Reviews for In Flight
typo chapter 8 . 11/13/2024
humanities capabilities - humanity's capabilities
typos chapter 7 . 11/13/2024
strong six sense - strong sixth sense
some kind smell - some kind of smell
typos chapter 7 . 11/11/2024
strong six sense - strong sixth sense
some kind smell - some kind of smell
typo chapter 5 . 11/11/2024
that bastard the Minaka - that bastard Minaka
Guest chapter 44 . 11/8/2024
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This fan thing for this story is a better ending for the whole shiru. End wren thing and saber, it actually makes sense, and as an emotionally crushed me for the whole moment.I've been waiting for the whole story for them to finally need to go together
Guest chapter 44 . 11/8/2024
You know what? I really wanted to hear this story was King Arthur f*** some s*** up or Tori to f*** some s*** up, right? You know what I'm saying, but no, you kicked in the f*** out of the story because of this s*** Do you understand the like connotations of rin like the nursing of clock tower would never f****** believe the whole fight was probably rigged. They'll probably believe that the political suicide you just did to written. This is the stupidity of that action It's so high for f****** 's f****** emmy afar for emmy is so f****** stupid like you, what do you did you know the character of rain?Just got f***** so hard by politically like all her allies and s***Holy f***, you know, that's probably gonna give her like the f****** clock tower, the ability to go after her for f****** saber, holy c***, they're all f*****
Guest chapter 41 . 11/8/2024
Well that was really sad
Guest chapter 25 . 11/8/2024
Oh, my god finally ren and saber s***I've been waiting for them yes
Guest chapter 25 . 11/7/2024
Now that hacker girl's a manipulating b**** to to our main man
Guest chapter 24 . 11/7/2024
Yeah, I love this part about shiro, not loving any of these girls. It's true, he's he, doesn't he? 's smoothly attracted by their bodies and maybe like them as people, but they she doesn't like them as is in love with any of them. They're in love with him. This relationship is very abusive. I've seen. Shiro, bin, really dealing with this really big like abusive relationship with all these aliens, girls, it's really sad
Guest chapter 24 . 11/7/2024
Holy s***, holy s*** He did it. He put the girl in her place.I wish he did the f*** up or something like that, but it was really good
Guest chapter 23 . 11/7/2024
Logic is so f****** stupid, okay context. He just said it's uncertain for my flock. If I'm only allowing one girl coming to my man cave shiro's man cave. Here's a place hoitz's magic. The places you want, all the girls to go and he's saying, it's not fair. That is so stupid every man. Needs a man cave. You get away from the girls. And this man has like ugh 6 girls, no no 6 girls. So this man nades, it's man cave and if those b****** have some problem with it, they can go go suck of the other man's c***, because I don't understand what shiro's being a little b**** about the whole. Oh, it's not fair for them. No, it is fair for them. He's man cave, he could do the hell. He wants. Chero is not that stupid
Guest chapter 22 . 11/7/2024
I gotta say i love how rain and everything how it everything happened.I love how you explained was very good, did very good job

Personally, another thing I really wish I could hear me the mom's talk with the sister, I would love to hear that like butcher reaction stuff. But well, you didn't show that sadly
Guest chapter 20 . 11/7/2024
This story is too much slice of life god why
Guest chapter 19 . 11/7/2024
You write him like a little b**** In chapter 19, like seriously. Oh I haven't been there about these b****** A******, m***** *******, she b******, mm. Are literally annoying as f*** and annoying to him? And they're screaming up is my wife and all this stuff. Yeah, dude, they're like they're so annoying. Like what the f*** are they so annoying? They just they just they don't act like people they're so annoying like, why is she real, like happy about this like oh I haven't been bad at like girls. He was forced upon them. This s*** show he's not supposed to be like these people. You should probably put his f****** foot down to these piece of c*** like what the f*** They're so these girls are so annoying
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