Reviews for In Flight
Cookie Sharter chapter 13 . 1/7
always hated tsunderes, abusive bitches who get away with it because of masochistic MCs, absolutely fucking hate tsukiumi because despite all of her murder attempts they just brush it aside because "oh she's been winged so she can't do shit to harm you" winging doesn't excuse the fact that she tried to murder you, and was being extremely rude too
Ann chapter 5 . 1/7
Excellent fight scene! Loved Shirou fighting and winning, yet with no witnesses. Certainly adds to his mystery even more, while still keeping magecraft secret. And Kuu wasn't winged! I'm here for Shirou's morals and his struggles to keep his annoyance in check every time someone seems incredulous about him not winging an 8 year old. Also, his continued lack of understanding about technological advances. Lol, don't text Shirou! He's unlikely to notice. Homura is over here shaking his head while also marveling at his good fortune in Ashikabi. And also giving into the notion of moving his Ashibaki (and his winged Sekirei, and his unwinged Sekirei, and his scrapped number) into a house with two other Sekirei. XD certainly looking forward to Shirou meeting the demon of the North and competing over the kitchen!
Ann chapter 4 . 1/7
Akitsu issues discussed far sooner than canon! Love it. I really enjoyed Musubi's entrance, and the conversation Shirou started by calling Homura. Yeah... if Shirou had met Musubi first, he would have avoided her, but because he winged Homura first (nothing short of mortal danger being enough to prompt him into doing more than looking after Akitsu), he had someone to ask. And Minaka finally called! He was absolutely gobsmacked at Shirou's lack of technological literacy (I can imagine Takami facepalming while Rin stares in incomprehension stronger than Shirou's) and simultaneously pleased and surprised by Shirou quick questions and assertive comments. Lol, Shirou knows way more than the average person about the Age of the God's. Loved the little tidbits about the 5th Holy Grail War, btw!
Poor Shirou, stuck in another war he didn't sign up for. But he's also very suspicious about it and it's organizers. This whole Sekirei thing, new aliens that are released into the city from a lab? A medical organization who has taken over the city and has been watching Shirou? Sketchy~ Can't wait for Shirou to start setting up magical defenses, or trying to convince Takami to help him find a more suitable living place (that kitchenette is /not/ going to survive two Sekirei).
Ann chapter 3 . 1/5
I absolutely loved the conversation between Kagami and Shirou! I guess Kagami reached the end of his rope so much faster than canon because Shirou is a trained magus, with stronger magic circuits. (And who's that i spy in the distance- Musubi?) It's fun to think how the Sekirei view themselves through the lense of MBI, with a basis in science, whereas Shirou looks at them from a mage perspective. Not so much just genetic compatibility as also od.
Oh my God, Yukari noooo. Very in character for her, I'm impressed. Akitsu- *facepalm* Poor Shirou.
Ann chapter 2 . 1/5
I nearly forgot to include this, but I really loved Shirou's offense at the apartment's so-called kitchen. Dude takes cooking seriously!
Ann chapter 2 . 1/5
Already we've got changes! Of course Shirou wouldn't leave Akizu in the park. She's not very cognitive right now, but she also has no issue telling him things.
I am enjoying your world building and story telling style! (Lmao, the hint about Rin v Luvia!) It is certainly an odd situation Shirou found himself in, with a living bio family. But it certainly is helpful to hiding from Clocktower. I'm guessing he never continued to Fuyuki, which is good since his home town is where any trackers would no doubt look. And it doesn't look like he told Fujimura anything so she'd be a dead-end too. Speaking of Taiga, loved Shirou's reflections on her place in his life (both as mother figure and the friend who eats all his food) and on Kiritsugu. And the explanation for how Saber is still in the world was great! I'm looking forward to more Fate things sprinkled in the Sekirei world. It's neat to see Sekirei from a Fate mage's pov.
Lol, Shirou and Kagami damn near got into a fight! Looking forward to more of that! Kagami is one of my favorite characters so I'm interested to see how his journey will change with Shirou in the vicinity. Tbh, I'm rooting for the pseudo-kouhai
Ann chapter 1 . 1/5
I'm normally not one for protagonist replacement stories, since they generally don't change much of the plot or acknowledge the skills the new protagonist can utilize the skills or resources they have from their original story. But this doesn't seem to be that kind of story. I loved Shirou's reactions to Karasuba, and how they discovered the relation between him and Takami. I'm looking forward to seeing how Shirou approaches the Sekirei war differently than the far less confident Minato. Shirou's already gone through his growing up journey so I'm excited to see what he does.
Similarly, I find the mystery of his departure from London intriguing. With UBW, how did Saber manage to stick around? And Rin was so determined that Shirou wouldn't follow Archer's sad fate that she determined to drag him along to mage school. I'm fairly certain Shirou was lying about most of what he said to Takami, what with being on the run from the Clocktower. Did Rin and Saber "cut ties" so they could figure stuff out from the inside? Does the Clocktower know about Saber continued existence? This is all so intriguing and I can't wait to see it eventually get explained as Shirou deals with MBI's schemes.
Shinigami200 chapter 5 . 1/2
Look listen Shirou is not so bad with tec that hes having this much trouble with a phone its basically saying he doesnt know how to use a dvd player because hes so dumb he doesnt know what a text ishe doesnt even know how text work wouldn’t know what a text is thats Tohsaka’s gag
Loxias Walker chapter 44 . 12/25/2023
I really like this fic, even if I didn't read or watch anything about sekirei the way the author explain make it easy to see a picture in my head. Even if its sometimes feels like an info dump it help to graps some conceps and the conection between both works.
The fights, the dynamic between characters and the comedy feels well executed,I don't really have many complains about this work,if they could have been called complains to begin.
First is that, well, the fic is long, don't take me wrong I enjoyed it with all my being, but sometimes it's feels like it's was unnesesary or some situations could be done in a short manner.
Second is that the final battle feels a bit anticlimactic, I neen, yeah theres no way Shirou at that point could lose, but i felt a bit disappointed.
Third it's about the epilogue,don't take me wrong, I love it, it's just that I would like to see what happened to some of the other characters.
Overall it's was a great read and I coul recomendate to everyone, I would say that at least you should have a minimal knowledge of fate, but the way the author explained some of the tidbits of fate were well to undestand, so as far as I'm corncerned, you would love it all.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2023
Like always you ruin your stories by writing in First Person POV.
59marxbb chapter 43 . 11/15/2023
Aah, still love this fic! Just reread the whole thing, what an absolute delight! Thank you so much for writing and sharing!
Guest chapter 42 . 10/20/2023
I can confirm that finding out that there exists porn of you is a very uncomfortable experience.
mahinik53 chapter 30 . 10/14/2023
When I read the first sentence “It had a two on it”.
My first thought was ‘Oh god, its a dragon ball’.
TheRaiderKing chapter 44 . 10/6/2023
I first read this when it was first completed, I liked it then and I loved it now. Bo real criticism except I wish it had been longer and that you had included Uzume in your epilogue; seems like she was just forgotten but Waver wasn't lol. Either way a fantastic read and I recommend it to anyone even if you hardly know anything of Sekirei or Fate/Stay Night.
VamPyr00 chapter 1 . 10/5/2023
Gotta say, I was skeptical at first but that was freaking glorious.
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