Real great, real special.

I must say. This story has been the most absorbing one I have ever read of fan fiction. Congratulations on a tale well thought out and followed through. You managed to incorporate both anime into one mangnificently well written book. And I must say that if I had found this as a hard back at my local book store I would be hard pressed to not snatch it up right away. Again, congratulations from an avid reader.

Using Excalibur should kill Shirou, if it dosent, youre not as good of a writer as I thought you was.

aww it's over… I want more

One of the best fanfictions I've read.

Bar none.

Amazing.

How did shirou analyze the jinki through the ipad? That is a mistake. All the ipad or whatever, is a screen made of glass and other trace compounds. The ipad is made by human hands, so calling it WRONG is a plot hole.

A better idea would have been to have Matsu bankrupt Higa.

Akitsu is number 8.

Her name is Akitsu and she doesn't have highlights her hair is a tan light brown color.

So Shirou is still having sex with Rin and Saber along with the rest of his flock...nice!

-Shirou X Harem!

Awesome...sad about the Saber and Rin part.

-Shirou X Harem!

Best story! 10/10 It's been one hell of an emotional roller-coaster!

"Also, do you have any idea how hard it is to write a fan-service scene without feeling like you're trying to write a porn script?"

That's probably because "fan-service" loosely translates to "soft core porn".

I just realised that 'he will be a changed man' line was a reference to Alan Turing. Am I right?

A very interesting and engaging story. Very well written.