Awesome story.

So, many years later on a whim I decided to reread Sekirei. Still an amazing read, especially in one marathon session.

This is a greedy question, but do you plan to continue writing fanction, or maybe original fiction?

Either, thanks for the fic thats part of my Headcannon Shirou.

Cheers

ehehahaha oh it feel so good to see this series again. Now that I think about it how would dresden react to this situation if he somehow had to go to japan?

Bro, that was seriously one of the best fics I have read in a long while. You must have them the size of volleyballs...
-EDM

...Seriously, wow.

Things are heating up!

I loved this chapter very much. It was noteworthy.

-N

That last scene was just amazing (and exasparating which is surely just a coincidence).

I think this was the crowning moment of awesome for me regarding this fic so far, and the finishing line was just the cherry on top.

What's going to be done regarding the Inn and the Shed though (and Miya but I know she's alright and will recover, which isn't something I can say for infrastructure in these circumstances) worries me.

-N

...Oh.

Wow.

-N

Poignant, this chapter was.

-N

On the other hand, now it's easier to play MBI and the Mages' Association against each other.

-N

"Oh hey, let's make sure this guy knows we plan on cutting him open to see how he works so that when he escapes he has no reason to fear ratting all of us out by asking for help."

Seriously, one Fate Worse Than Death is as good as another in this case.

If Shirou was feeling spiteful he could easily expose mage-craft in general and The Clock Tower in particular to MBI and there's nothing they could do about it unless he puts in a half-hearted effort.

I mean, really. Cliche much?

-N

Ahahahahaha...!

That ending...

-N

Woah. What a read. Great writing, interesting integration of the two universes, lovely fighting scenes. At some points, there was a slight pacing issue with your dialogues because you kept interrupting them with numerous character thoughts, but if we set that aside I can't really find any other fault with the story.

Well done for having some amazing ideas and the tenacity to type such a long story. It is impressive.

I read this story over the course of three days. Most people do not have the privilege of the amount of free time I have or the will to sit and read 700k word story unless they're already heavily invested in it in some fashion, ie if it is a fanfiction about two series they really like. While I enjoyed f/sn and sekirei both neither are among my favorite series. I think I can be counted as a relatively neutral observer.

This story overall has some very great points. It also has a tremendous amount of fluff, entire chapters and characters that could be pared with little impact to the plot contributing towards its frankly massive length. If you enjoy fluff, "slice of life" style chapters as the author terms it, there is more than enough within this work for you. They are sort of problematic in terms of pacing in the middle 35% or so of the story.

All-in-all, it's a good, fairly relaxed harem romp. There are enough great moments to make up for some pacing issues, but it may not be enough for slower readers.

I read this story over the course of three days. Most people do not have the privilege of the amount of free time I have or the will to sit and read 700k word story unless they're already heavily invested in it in some fashion, ie if it is a fanfiction about two series they really like. While I enjoyed f/sn and sekirei both neither are among my favorite series. I think I can be counted as a relatively neutral observer.

This story overall has some very great points. It also has a tremendous amount of fluff, entire chapters and characters that could be pared with little impact to the plot contributing towards its frankly massive length. If you enjoy fluff, "slice of life" style chapters as the author terms it, there is more than enough within this work for you. They are sort of problematic in terms of pacing in the middle 35% or so of the story.

All-in-all, it's a good, fairly relaxed harem romp. There are enough great moments to make up for some pacing issues, but it may not be enough for slower readers.

A/N should really be written at the end of a chapter unless its warnings and stuff like that, if you always write all your A/N at the start and you have something important you want to tell your readers then the likelyhood of it getting read is lessened drastically because many of us dont want to risk being spoiled.