I love the idea of this! Update soon!

This was kind of interesting premise to see i guess. one thing I am not sure of at all is the nervousness he displays at the end in regards to his mothers last question. I can see the part where he was shocked and what not playing out like that but at the same time he is now an adult and she has not been part of his life for 15 years during which he already got another parental figure so I am not sure he would suddenly get so worried about the judgement a more or less stranger would be making about his life choices.

Just a random thought; does this means Rin has another boyfriend? If I recall Rin mentioned she needed another magi in order to keep Saber in this world.

At any rate I must say I am quite dissapointed in not seeing a sequel (or spinoff) of HoS. On the otherhand I am certain this new fic will be just as epic as hoS. Although I do have another question. Will Rin and Saber at some point make an appearance?

I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Funny. Hm. Maybe.

OOOOH SNAP!

Well I'm jumping into this one with my arms wide open! I'm ready for whatever you throw at me, I eagerly await the next chapter!

Once again, you use a series that I have minimal knowledge of, but because you've brought Emiya Shirou in as the protagonist, I'm gonna read the whole thing. And love it. Kinda bummed that he broke-up with Rin and Saber, but now he's got all of the Sekirei hotties to choose from .

The long-lost-son thing was really unexpected for me, since I have no idea if it's canon or not for Sekirei, but at least it's explained in a believable way.

Looking forward to the next chapter, keep up the great work!

Interesting crossover with Sekirei, and a great start. I definitely look forward to reading more!