Too many sexual inuedoes, especially about the host club and kareoke club thing, but otherwise good update.

Interesting though A. I'm suprised he hasn't tried to subtly contact his mother for more information on Sekirei and B. I'm hoping for some more action soon (not to complain).

Oh...my...god...that was absolutely hilarious...*snicker*

Yukari has to be one of the greatest characters ever, lmao...you certainly managed to depict someone who goes all-out when they decide to do something. And the idea that she's figuring out how she should act from shoujo and hentai manga...rofl.

To answer the question you posed at the beginning of the chapter, I didn't think the scene with Kagari/Homura came-off as forced. Then again, it might just be my inexperience with Sekirei that makes me think that, but I'm more inclined to trust in you as an author. .

Hopefully the next chapter comes in just as timely a manner as the others, keep up the great work!

Hahahahahaha! *Busts a lung, rib, and a piece of intestine due to too much laughter* ouch... but ahhahahahaha!

That moment at the end almost killed me. Ahhh, I knew that Akitsu's forgetfulness for clothing would seriously make my day. I just didn't think that THIS was the way that she got her original clothing from canon. That little twerpy rich kid seriously must have been messed up in the head.

His sister is weird, but we all already knew that. At least, even if she does have a brother complex, it seems to be showing itself in a very funny way. I feel very sorry for that little kid/sekirei (Shiina or something right?) who is going to be partnered with her. Maybe it would be better to leave him out of this, ya know? Or, at the very least, keep them from meeting anytime soon. If the poor guy is going to suffer the humiliation of being dressed up like a doll, it might as well be a long way off.

I really liked how you handled the case with Homura. Much better than Minato would have. The dream was especially cool. It looks like you found another thing that Servants and Sekirei have in common; they give their masters/ashikibi strange dreams. Isn't that an interesting coincidence?

Update again soon! I wanna see the other sekirei he'll have!

So Shirou gets his first two sekirei. Interesting choice of having fire and ice be his first. Good atmosphere during Shirou and Kagari's conversation, akward while still being rather serious and urgent. I cant wait to read more of this, and if you need any inspiration for the characters there are some good stories for sekirei by lord of the land of fire.

Too awesome for words, did Kagari get Shirou's number by asking Yasaka? And I wonder if Kagari's going to assume that he's going to be living with SHirou now? Can't wait for the next chapter.

I can't stop laughing, oh gods make it stop it hurts.

I've read your previous story and I must say I quite like how you do Shirou. Though I am really looking forward to Yasakas reastion to Kagari and Shirou in the future. Especially if he hears those rumors and puts two and two together...

Great chapter I lol-ed the entire time with the akward moments between Shiro and Kagari. The perverted Yukari was the funniest though. update soon!

Hahahaha! This is funny...

Hmm, the magical smells of the Sekirei... Given that some have very similar abilities (weapon/fist users and such) quite a few would have similar scents, with only the really powerful or well known to Shirou having unique smells. I'll take a guess at the major ones. Kagari and Akizu have already been mentioned (Smoke and frost respectively), and I'll agree with megu that Kusano will be fresh cut grass. I'll guess that Tsukiumi will smell like the ocean, and Kazehana will smell like sakura blossoms on the wind. Matsu... new electronics maybe? Musubi: sweat perhaps, the pleasant light scent of sweat after a good work out. Uzumi would be freshly laundered clothes.

Well everything seems to be interesting so far, looking forward to where it's going to go. One of the reasons we're all so fixated on the issue of why Sabre, Rin, and he broke up is that it just seems so impossible. Given how much loyalty is a part of their personalities, it'd be more likely they'd go on the run from the Clock Tower together than brake up. I just can't see them drifting apart either. Is it any wonder that the only way we can conceive of it happening is if it was to a)Keep them from being implicated in whatever trouble Shirou is in and b)Keep them free while Rin tries to find a solution (perhaps getting in contact with Zeltrect?). We can only see them planning that the separation is (hopefully) temporary. Although I can understand you not telling us why for a while due to 'dramatic necessity'. Hopefully when we do find out why it'll be both plausible and in character.

Shirou's acute sensitivity to magic, leading to him detecting a Sekirei's affinity, huh...

If Kagari "smoke", Akitsu "ice"... I'd love to seem him encounter Real!Minato's girls like Tsukiumi (watery smell?) and Kusano (fresh green lawns, mmhm). :D

need a HAREM!

a damn twist created...

got this little image running about in my mind and thought i share it with you "The white blade and his swordbirds" meaning shirou with his harem...er sekirei each welding a continue to update soon!

Yay for Akizu being the first. And it's also interesting that Kagari had such a reaction to him. The only problem I have so far is the fact that Saber isn't around, but for one, that would kill alot of chances for Shirou badassness, and two, I am confident it will be explained to my understanding. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter, so that I have something to read, being that no one else seems to want to update in sufficient enough quantities or quickly enough to satisfy my rather voracious appetite.