Remember to make sure that Shirou doesn't immediately start thinking of her as mother. Also, he wouldn't care about judgment from someone who is essentially a stranger/

I would like it if his name wasn't changed.

I'm looking forward to this new installment of "The New Protagonist is a Badass."

I'm hoping against hope that Shirou will run into The Blue. I'm guessing this is in parallel to HoS and not a prequel, so nothing is a given. Heck, Shirou might even enter a relationship that doesn't involve a dead girl. Not that I dislike Saber, I just thought that was always a little creepy. Huh, wonder if Yukari will still be wearing the incest hat...

This is the second time you've replace main characters who I didn't much care for in exchange for a competent Shirou complete with sword blasting capacity. Hat's off to you.

Oh! a totally interesting fic, i read storys about Sekirei, but most of those just make Minato slightly less usless, however this crossover version of yours is definetly not useless! i serioulsy cant wait to see how the story goes, and who will become his sekirei

Can't wait for the next chap!

For all that is pure and holy, PLEASE DON'T LET THIS STORY BE DROPPED!

Heh. Again, I know next to nothing about the second topic besides what's on wikipedia/wikia, but this is already starting to look promising. Haha, props to you as a writer! I wouldn't normally pick up something at random like this, even if I did know the author from some other fic. :)

Maa, I think I've been in this whole 'fanfic reading' business a bit too long. Even before clicking on the link to the first chapter, I had pretty much guessed how part of this would go; your mention of Shirou's parents in the beginning note just hammered that suspicion home. Combined with previous experience with your story-telling style (i.e. Shirou replacing Saito in Hill of Swords...not that I'm really complaining. From what little I've learned of Saito's character, I'm not really all that impressed and can live without exploring the depths of that character)... Well, it could also always just be me. I seem to actually do that a lot. A LOT. It can get slightly disturbing, sometimes.

Enough about that; back to story! Kinda wondering what happened/what Shirou did ('cause he just can't seem to back down..) to cause him to get hunted by that Association, but more power to 'im. Heh, maybe he can get a rep like the Blue! (Ah, sorry. Random image/storyline that fell into my head involving HoS!Louise after the final chapter going around as 'The Blue' to escape her old rep, then building a new one much like the original's. Yeeaahhhh...my mind's a bit overactive, sometimes...) Still, wonder how things would go from here... On one hand, if he started using his original name again, it would probably be easier to hide away from the Mage Association. On the other hand, he's been 'Shirou Emiya' for the past..what, fifteen years now? That's not something you just throw away. Heh...and to think; Shirou/Archer might just prove to have a genetic disposition to having white hair :D Plus there's the fact that he's going into this whole battle storyline with his own magic, weapons, and combat experience to boot...yeah. This should definitely prove to be interesting.

Well, that's all for now

see you next chapter!

Quite The twist. I wonder what Shiro will do here?

You know that the people who complained about Shiro/Saber and Nasu inaccuracies will now complain about Rin and Arturia apparently abandoning or turning on Shiro.

Personally I suspect there's more going on here than what's apparent. Have to wait until we find out why Shiro fled the Clock Tower I guess.

hi there and nice idea maybe i should watch the sekirei anime to undrestand better this fic but for now you really made a fine work (like HoS i still will put my coins in siesta favor ja!) and i like Shirou from UBW route becouse there he was the most stronger of him in al the routes and now i think if he is capable of defeating whitout training gilgamesh then this adveture will be nothing and he will be sorrounded by big breasted hot chiks to have any kind of fun JA! well see ya later in the next chapter you rule and you know that!

Correction. It's only the stupid F/sn-ers that don't like Saber. Because they're stupid. And I hate them.

On to the actual review!

Gabriel, Gabriel, Gabriel! You're not just asking me to suspend my disbelief here, you're asking me to draw and quarter it. Minato and Shirou look nothing alike! And also, Archer's appearance was caused by his constant use of reinforcement/projection magic. At least, that's what I think I heard. And what the heck? Saber and Rin broke up with him because he was kicked out of school! Why?

Ughh . . . this story is already giving me headaches. I need to know more! Damnit! At the very least this promises to be an interesting tale . . .

P.S.: Shirou meeting Minaka will be a crowning moment of funny!

-P4L

You got to love the way the chapter ended hehehe.

Good start, and the action was good as Shirou showed he had some teeth. Don't know this Sekirei but I didn't know F/SN or Familiar of Zero when you did Hill of Swords so I'm confident of your skill at telling a good tale. Looking forward to more.

Gabriel, what is it with you and stalking my favorite anime? First it was ZnT now its Sekrei and crossing it over with F/SN to boot.. Win! Looks like I'm following another of your series! Good job so far!

huh nice

Watching Sekirei now! BBL. Update when I’m done O’K’?

Hoo boy... Yet another interesting set-up you got going here. You've certainly made me curious as to all the things that went on in the past week since you talk about not only a break-up but also being chased down by the Magus Association.

Now I'm not sure about my theory, but here's my guess about what has happened to Shirou. Last week, something happened at Clock Tower that caused Shirou to do something stupidly heroic... Again... This stupidly heroic action unfortunately, exposed the fact that Shirou has a reality marble in some way or form. I'm not sure if this information is canon off the top of my head, but from what I remember the Magus Association will hunt down people with Reality Marbles and dissect them if only to learn how they work.

You have stated that this is a Good End Unlimited Blade Works scenario. Honestly, I don't see Shirou doing something that could piss off Rin AND Saber enough to break up with him especially given Saber's need for Prana so I'm going to go with the break up being made out of necessity to protect Rin and Saber from the fallout, with the two girls relying on stores of Rin's Jewels to cover for the lack of a 2nd magus to help fuel Saber. As opposed to them not getting along, which I would hate. If that was the case I'd expect you to have made this UBW TRUE End as making it the Good End and them breaking up because of issues seems needlessly cruel to me as a Fate/Stay Night fan.

Anyways, I'm guessing that Shirou broke up with them in order to shelter them from the Association so that only he'd be hunted. After all, unlike in Heaven's Feel Rin has NOT been able to use the Jeweled Sword of Zelretch. This also means that Rin has not been made Zelretch's apprentice and as such doesn't have his influence to protect Shirou from the association like he did to protect Shirou (for his puppet body and Reality Marble) and Sakura (For being a corrupted grail) in the Heaven's Feel ending. This lack of protection resulted in a rough break-up that none of the three want to have, but eventually deem necessary, hence the sore feelings Shirou has when thinking about it. From this point on, Shirou fought his way out of the country and ended up here in Shin Tokyo.

At least this is my theory about what's going on. You're the writer so only you know for sure (and even then it may change XD). I sincerely hope that I'm at least correct about the break-up theory though as I would hate for Rin and Saber to have broken up with him because they actually were having relationship issues, especially given Shirou's earnest personality and the fact he actually likes them as opposed to Hill of Swords where he was simply staying loyal to Saber.

Well, whatever the case you've got a good start so far. I honestly wasn't expecting a story where Shirou's original parents were still alive, and to make him a displaced Minato give logical reasoning for why you would place him here in Shin Tokyo at the start of Sekirei and why he'd be staying there since he's gotten the chance now to re-acquire his old legal identity (which will help him immensely in hiding from the Association).

Great job so far man. I'll definitely be following the story along.