Excellent as always. Keep up the good work, and I hope you manage to update as fast as you did for Hill of Swords.

The premise does seem a little forced, however, given the fact that Shiro has no resemblance to Minato as they are drawn.

well color me impressed. I honestly never made a connection between Sekirei and F/SN but now that you mentioned it about the whole hair thing it kinda clicked. Mostly Ive been reading stuff from Cyrstal Hall Forums for Whateley Academy Stories and I thought hey Shirou is a dead ringer for a Manifester. I thought that would make some kind of crazy sense. But now I am psyched for this new story.

All aboard the story mobile! Good to see you've started a new story. I'll be following this one.

I haven't really watch the Ultimate Blade Works, but I've seen the first Animated series of Fate/Stay Night. As for Seikirei, I've only read a bit of the manga while I was in Japan...and we all love big bewbies...however I had to choose between Seikirei and Macademi Wasshoi and I chose the latter... This really looks interesting. I've read till the last 3 chapters of HoS and will continue it when I have time, but this really looks promising! Please do continue!

It's funny I was just watching Sekirei last night. Looks interesting. I really want to find out what happened with Clock Tower but I'm sure it'll come up later. Anyways thanks for what looks like another interesting read.

Entertaining read, if a bit gramatically spotty in some parts; hope we can see a fast update schedule again.

( I jolted awake when the plane landed in the Shin Tokyo airport. The first thing that crossed through my mind when I transitioned from being asleep to being awake was where the nearest sword was. )

Not sure if this was intentional, but most of Nasu's works always has the main protagonist "waking up". Check the Nisual Novels if you don't believe me. This might be an unintended shout out already. Then again, it might not be, considering it isn't in Kara no Kyoukai's novels (which I'm not sure if you read or not).

By the way, when you say you have more knowledge on the Nasu-verse, does that mean you looked into Talk, the Material Books, DDD, Melty Blood, and Fate Extra?

So Shirou is a ... magic user on the run, like Touko Aozaki?

The technology boom would be very ... well, magi don't have a need for such things if magecraft can achieve the same results. This made Rin hilariously inept with technology, and if you somehow include the ineptitude of technology with magi in this, I'll be happy.

That machine probably didn't record Shirou as an Emiya, since he was adopted by Kiritsugu...

( she looked up to give me a glare that would have been frightening if my girlfriends hadn't both been much better at it then her, )

lol Rin.

( That portion of my skin had probably just received the smoothest shave it ever would. )

Damn, wish I had one of those.

( Touhsaka )

That's the first time I saw her name spelled this way.

( "What was that you mentioned about having been kicked out of school? Or about your girlfriends?" and here she drew out and emphasized the plural form of the word as her eyes narrowed.

I swallowed, suddenly a great deal more worried than I had been even when I had Karasuba's sword against my throat earlier. This, this can't be a good way to start of getting to know your long lost mother. )

Well, there's bad karma.

This. Is. AWESOME!

The long-lost son thing was a bit weird, but nonetheless interesting. It doesn't fit if you think about it (with him having brown eyes and red hair) but I'm sure you can come up with something to explain. Maybe one of his grandparents had red hair and it skipped a generation, or it might be due to having Avalon inserted into him, hm?

Too bad that he broke it off with Rin and Saber. Really wishing to find out about that later. What could make him run for his life and end such a nice three-way relationship? I'm not being sarcastic by the way.

I'm gonna certainly enjoy this one! Can't wait to see what you come up with!

great start and realy when I saw the notice of this chapter on my mail and saw the FSN and Sekirei cross I too asked miself why there wasnt more of it as for the chapter itself I think it was realy good altough I realy want to know what the fuck did he do to get kicked out of the school and for his girlfrieds to broke up him and is so bad that people are trying to kill him. Also cant wait for the next chapter to see the rest of the conversation and how much information hes gonna give and get in return as well as what hes gonna do from there so please update as soon as you can.

I have no problem with the fact that Shiro's parents are alive in this fic, fanfiction is there to modify/change/alter/bend truths about the original fiction to suit the story's needs. Simply spouting nonstop cannon would be kinda boring... Nicely done I say.

Well... not all that much to say honestly.

Might be because I know absolutely nothing about Sekirei and little to nothing about F/ST after the war ended.

Writing wise it’s up to your usual standard at least.

Hopefully things will pick up.

Oh god, this is golden. Shirou in Sekirei. He's got the right mindset, but I am going to love how the Sekirei are going to react to Shirou's 'I'll fight you stay here and stay safe' mindset.

Also, I want to see the flashbacks of what got Shirou kicked out. Though it probably has something to do with his Reality Marble.

And were there honestly a lot of reviewers that complained about the Nasu Verse stuff? I mean, while there were some errors, it was pretty much better than what most people use when writing FSN.

i like the idea... and i will read the nex chapter )

Well thats a great thing to tell your mother, Mom ive taken part in relationships with multiple partners, had sex, fought in a war, almost died multipule times, killed, and am in love with a dead girl

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Down with Minato!

He sucks anyway!

We needed a good, awesomesauce hero in Sekirei to make it less boring!

KEEP GOING