Reviews for In Flight
nnnnmhughuuhhjiijj chapter 28 . 4/8/2023
He really couldn't have said, they were pretty much fighting-ghost-slaves?
nnnnmhughuuhhjiijj chapter 28 . 4/8/2023
He didn't knew what Thaumaturgy was? I suprised that Rin hasn't beaten everything relating to basics into his bones for years.
TKstein chapter 28 . 4/4/2023
This story has long been finished, so there's no point cribbing about it now, but could you please explain the mindset that let to Uzume not asking Shirou for help when Higa was blackmailing her? He's clearly capable, and certainly a much more preferable option for an alliance
nnnnmhughuuhhjiijj chapter 18 . 4/1/2023
Man, it seems out of character for Shirou to threaten Karasuba for just a name.
chrismurraycm7043276 chapter 28 . 3/29/2023
'second sorcery
Guest chapter 44 . 3/27/2023
Honestly? One of the greatest fics I have ever read.
AvirRapter chapter 41 . 3/11/2023
I must admit, I was *not* expecting this chapter to hit as hard as it did, holy shit. Actually, everything from 39 onwards hit me. Damn.
Guest chapter 44 . 3/9/2023
To this day I’m wowed by how well you were able to integrate the two worlds, but the most impressive part has to be the thematic links, which in my view elevate this story past being just another crossover fic. The execution was all there, but the idea of the Sekirei filling Shirou’s void fit perfectly and allowed the story to trend towards what felt like a natural conclusion. I would’ve liked to see a little more with Rin and Saber, or even a brief fight between Saber and Miya or Karasuba, but I understand why you didn’t go there as it would’ve been too hard to fit into the rules and development as you’d established it. Overall a fantastic story.
OolongAtMidnight chapter 44 . 2/10/2023
Eirei. A-ray. You utter madman. I cannot believe it.
kevinthegoat0304 chapter 1 . 2/10/2023
The only reason why in every fanfic Shirous parents are dead is because they actually are lol. If Shirous parents were alive you’d think they would look for him at the hospital. It was implied heavily when he was losing he memory of his past life that he was told to run because they were dead.
kgtab chapter 44 . 1/29/2023
Amazing fic and a very nice ending. Even though i have some disagreeances with character moments and problems with lore, story itself is very solid. I really enjoyed the fic even though my reviews might have suggested otherwise...(sorry but I'm rather bad at exceeding things I enjoy)
kgtab chapter 41 . 1/28/2023
Shirou's post flight state scenes where amazing. Love pretty much everything about them
kgtab chapter 40 . 1/28/2023
Rin being the one to put shirou on Kiritsugu 2.0 way is pretty interesting idea, even though I kinda disagree. Considering that she made a promise to Archer and this way of life is as far away from the point of this promise as just outright telling Shirou to kill himself, imo she wouldn't have chose that. And well Shirou himself wouldn't have followed up on it due to once again archer.
But again she's pretty pragmatic and with her thinking that this would end quickly she might have went with this plan. But as it usually goes with Rin the most important part of the plan didn't work, but it didn't work in the best way possible because he met his flock in the end

Shirou never laughing with Rin and Saber seems kinda silly to me, but honestly I too can't remember the time when he outright laughed in UBW it may have more to do so with him not doing this openly than not having fun, since he for sure love to troll Fujinee, Rin and even Saber. But Fujinee is the main victim for sure

Rin not joining his harem due to pride is contentious imo. I can kinda see where you're coming from, but again Saber exists. This is honestly the main reason why I prefer UBW good end over "True" end. Sunny day clearly shows that she's ready to damage herself for his sake and even share him with another girl.
Saber seems more probable in my eyes, but she too stopped pursuit of her dream for Shirou's sake so it isn't 100%.
This can be explained with them having problems at the moment and not like this is a big problem anyway bruh

Rin finding a way to bring Shirou back is very nice and prolly exactly what would've happened (if they wouldn't have been taken hostage that is) especially considering that as Case file and Adventures of El Meloi II show they're on a pretty good terms

Also fish seggs reference to FSN H scenes is peak. 100/10
kgtab chapter 37 . 1/28/2023
"Thirty minutes" Homura...
Higa arc speedrun seigi no mikata% WR fr fr
kgtab chapter 33 . 1/27/2023
*Shirou is indeed lowkey hypocritical in his dream, but it is more due to the fact that he differentiates people who "deserve" to be saved and not. It is due to the fact that even pre 5th HGW events he already knew that he can't really save everyone, so he made a compromise in killing "villains", regardless of their connection to him. It is to the point where he was deadset in choking out his best friend in Fate, was ready to decapitate his crush in UBW and also one of the reasons why Mind of steel is even a possibility. In reality if Sakura was a genuinely bad person during church events of HF route, he prolly wouldn't have turned into Kiritsugu 2.0 after killing her. He would've grieved, but not to the extent where he would've turned his heart to iron.
*Other part to this is that Shirou also emphasizes things like them being magi. If they're a magi they willingly walk with death, so it's ok to kill them. That's pretty much exactly how his logic went with Shinji, excluding whole "killing entire school" part. Same should also apply to soldiers and alike.
*Tbh him being "ok" with killing isn't really surprising. He might hate the deed more than anything else, but he is still a sword after all.
Ofc all of this is my views of his character and nothing more

Shirou being ok with counter force potentially controlling every aspect of his life is really cool. Parallels between CF and Justice start to be drawn by themselves. Since Hero of Justice is someone who specifically works for the sake of said justice this translates into Shirou having no problems with said influence. Of course those 'paralels' aren't without flaws, since his view of justice involves saving everyone, but it is still pretty interesting nonetheless

"This isn't interesting at all!"
Bruh Homura got some kinks huh
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