Reviews for Life Collapses
Shadow chapter 8 . 5/29/2013
Hurry up uhhhhhhh
MadMeijin chapter 8 . 5/27/2013
Love the story. I see Katara is irrational as always. Soooo anxious to see how she reacts next chapter.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/21/2013
This story is great I have read it several times. Please update soon.
Bree chapter 8 . 5/21/2013
OMG an update OMG I LOVE YOU! Don't leave us for months again please.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/20/2013
Please update
Kamil the Awesome chapter 8 . 5/16/2013
So lets see how many months it takes to get another chapter. Really like this, uh, 'minor' AU.
bankai789 chapter 8 . 5/12/2013
plese continue soon
Guest chapter 8 . 5/8/2013
can't wait to read the update.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
wow, you have quite an interesting premise. definitely a quality read barring the few spelling errors. and that prequel, man, my jaw literally dropped.
saxsui chapter 8 . 5/7/2013
The pacing seems kind of rushed, but I'm hooked. I plan to follow this story to the end.
sakataring chapter 8 . 5/7/2013
oh snap, shit just got real. here's hoping there'll be an update soon, the suspense is killing me.
sakataring chapter 5 . 5/7/2013
frickin intense chapter. noticed a typo: "surely" not "surly"
sakataring chapter 3 . 5/7/2013
another excellent chapter. I'm sure glad I decided to randomly click on your profile :p been a real page-turner (in a manner of speaking) so far.
sakataring chapter 2 . 5/7/2013
ah, the plot thickens. Well done on the writing, very believable characters.
CallMeMatrix chapter 8 . 5/7/2013
Love the story. I would like to see it finished. However, please please please correct the name usage. In this chapter you go back and forth between Coldwater (ugh) and Coldfire (yay). If you change their name fine, but use the same throughout the whole story.
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