Reviews for Life Collapses
Guest chapter 8 . 5/20/2013
Please update
Kamil the Awesome chapter 8 . 5/16/2013
So lets see how many months it takes to get another chapter. Really like this, uh, 'minor' AU.
bankai789 chapter 8 . 5/12/2013
plese continue soon
Guest chapter 8 . 5/8/2013
can't wait to read the update.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
wow, you have quite an interesting premise. definitely a quality read barring the few spelling errors. and that prequel, man, my jaw literally dropped.
saxsui chapter 8 . 5/7/2013
The pacing seems kind of rushed, but I'm hooked. I plan to follow this story to the end.
sakataring chapter 8 . 5/7/2013
oh snap, shit just got real. here's hoping there'll be an update soon, the suspense is killing me.
sakataring chapter 5 . 5/7/2013
frickin intense chapter. noticed a typo: "surely" not "surly"
sakataring chapter 3 . 5/7/2013
another excellent chapter. I'm sure glad I decided to randomly click on your profile :p been a real page-turner (in a manner of speaking) so far.
sakataring chapter 2 . 5/7/2013
ah, the plot thickens. Well done on the writing, very believable characters.
CallMeMatrix chapter 8 . 5/7/2013
Love the story. I would like to see it finished. However, please please please correct the name usage. In this chapter you go back and forth between Coldwater (ugh) and Coldfire (yay). If you change their name fine, but use the same throughout the whole story.
B-MIMMS chapter 7 . 5/4/2013
GREAT STORY ! But YOU can't leave it like this ! ITS A CRIME!
vienx.001 chapter 8 . 5/5/2013
yeahhhh
UPDATEEEEEEEEEED !
i ve been waiting forever !
i am glad you update i hope u continue and finish this..
well its kinda too fast the revelation of mrs. coldfire but u are the writer..well i just have obe critic that is the update time.. i tell u..
i ve lost all hope that u will update this..
but then u update..
thanks and keep update ASAP
Furionknight chapter 8 . 5/4/2013
I look forward to more :)
TimeBomber chapter 8 . 5/4/2013
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YOU UPDATED!
Please tell me you still have plans to finish this story!
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