Reviews for Wormhole Resurrecution
Son of Whitebeard chapter 2 . 8/26/2014
very dark
PassionofNoir chapter 2 . 1/13/2013
Next chsapter btw when will lucas come in the story?
jamie Goldspink chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
But Josey took the boll from the past for von's mum i don't know about it
jack chapter 2 . 6/5/2011
jack chapter 2 . 6/5/2011
Guest chapter 2 . 5/21/2011
Wow, i really dont know what to say...
Crush48 chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Sup dude, and yea, interesting concept.

I just advise you to seperate lines between speakers, so as not to cause confusion.

For example:

" Its been a year since Avaners down fall and the time line is the way its suppose to be and the future is secure" said Janitor.

"Yes this is true" said the other black hooded stranger.

"Well if this is true than what is the reason you came to see me after all this time, Jane" said Janitor.

This makes it easier to tell who is talking when the character have seperate speech lines, and it doesn't look jumbled.

BTW, keep up the good work.