Reviews for Down Inside of You
mandic84 chapter 3 . 4/25/2011
really missing this story, hope you update soon.
NatalieLynn chapter 3 . 2/7/2011
Bella's got it bad, and I don't blame her one bit! Having Jasper that way would be too kuch temptation for even Mother Theresa to resist. ;) Great story so far! I can't wait for their dinner date to see what happens next!
bean2011 chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
Hello Pups,

Ok i read the 1st chapter this ...i just love it.. stripper Bella cowboy always big hugs to u. :)
slytheringrl17 chapter 3 . 1/15/2011
I like it can't wait to read more
luvkiss1973 chapter 3 . 1/9/2011
well hells bells darlin lol i think i'm in love with this story, just found ya so will keep reading, keep up the good work
Sonja Whitlock chapter 3 . 1/8/2011
Awesome story; I can't wait to read about their first date.
Manda CullenMccartyWhitlock chapter 3 . 12/19/2010
Sweetheart... I love ur flithy fucking mouth... and mind for that matter... what r u going to get these kids into? I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT! AWESOME fic so far babe... alerting and favoriting! *mwah*

Skychaser chapter 3 . 12/19/2010
ROFLMAO. Favorite line? "Over an hour later I had ridden more football jocks than a slutty cheerleader after a homecoming game and I was exhausted." This is gold. In fact, I think it may have to go into the Favorite Quotes group. Seriously. :)

Yay! Douchey McAsshat returns! :P Wait ... ugh, no. Really? Douchey McAsshat wants *what*? Yick. Go Bella. :vomits: Oh wait ... now I feel like Bella. What? Oooohhh ... Jasper lap dance. :D :inner squee: Okay. He can be forgiven. But his nickname MUST remain Douchey McAsshat. Because it is epic. :P

OMG that lap dance. A nice lap dance? You liar. A motherfuck hot lap dance is more like it. Sex on fire doesn't even describe it. And Bella KNOWS she's more than happy to go a little further with this customer. :P

A date is good. :D A date is very good. But now ... well, my questions run off with me, and I have to wonder, if they start dating will Jasper appreciate her line of work as much as he does now? I is not so sure. But that brings in the tension, yes? :D

I love this and hope you write more soon love, but more than anything, I hope you start (and keep) feeling better and better.

Working with Santa on those Christmas presents, always yours,

Skychaser chapter 2 . 12/19/2010
Hehe, morbid curiosity for car accidents ... don't we all. :)

So, I'm REALLY loving Bella's persona. I'm imagining a 50's, girl next door kind of thing going on, with the black halter and luscious curls and such. I love it ... it soo fits with the silent, green eyed cowboy. *sigh* Green eyes ... yay. Oh, and car? Hell yes. '75 GTO is perfection. :D

ROFLMAO - Douchey McAsshat ... can this be his permanent name? Like, forever? :D

Oh yes! Cowgirl meets her cowboy ... love it.

Omg omg omg! SHE STOLE HIS HAT! That bitch is HERS! No shit! :D Bella is good at what she does, no denying that. I love her dancing skills, I just wish I could learn a few of my own. Okay, so I really love that she stole his hat. That just made me giddy inside. :D Can't wait to move on to chapter three!

This? Is awesome love! :D

TheWhitlocksGirl chapter 3 . 12/18/2010
HOT MUCH? Wow this is a rocking story. The music is perfect and Jasper? well he's always HOT. Keep it coming :)
smelsies chapter 3 . 12/18/2010
Ooo Bella likes Jasper and I think Jasper likes Bella back. I can't wait to see how that date goes. I really love the story and can't wait for more.
sshart chapter 3 . 12/18/2010
love it!
forgotten22 chapter 3 . 12/18/2010
SQUEEEEEEEE she's practically humping him. I'm too excited for this ;) hahha I am so ready for these kids to just strip down and do the dirty in the club right then and there! haha That'd be illegal though probably.. and ummm that's not a whole lot of play time. Soo she can just mysteriously wake up in bed with this hottie one morning. Taking her work home with her. It is such a pleasure doing business with him ;D Woohooo :D

Anyways, great song choices! :) I enjoyed them. Thanks for the shout-outs :) Always appreciated! I don't necessarily feel like I contribute much haha I'm just happy to help a friend out :)

I love Alice's questioning on what was going on. Bella needed a cool down moment. It's hard to walk around that aroused ;) Which makes me wonder how Jasper did it? ;) haha Gah, seriously.. hot! I'm dying over here! Throw me a bone ;) ;) *wink, wink* hahahha (I know I'm corny.. I can't help it!)

AND! She's going on a date with him! OHMYGOSHIMSOEXCITED! I can't wait for that! This ought to be great. He's a total sweetie and I hope they have some sexual tension in the air, because they are both sexy as hell. Especially Jasper, unffff.

Ok, I need to go off to bed now, hopefully. With happy dreams of lap dance galore and a very hot Jasper feeling me (Bella) up. nom nom nom! I'm dying for it! :D I can't wait! Looking forward to their date! Love the polyvore too! You're doing great! xo
This Guilty Blood chapter 3 . 12/18/2010
Hey Girl! I loved this chapter! I have to tell you, I'm ot usually a "Jella" fan - but this...It's too hot not to love!

Can't wait for more. x TGB
forgotten22 chapter 2 . 12/17/2010
Ummm I kind of love you. Just so you know. ;) This story is so hot! It's inspiring me to want to be a stripper ;) haha Or at least to go out and know how to work a pole and do a top-dollar lap dance.

Excellent song selections :) I enjoyed them a lot! And HECK YES! He's baaaaack! ;D ;D I'm so very looking forward to this :D And she stole his cowboy hat. Hells yes! She looks hot in his clothes ;) Even if it is only a hat! Gah, I want her to just get it on with him already haha

Love, love, love it! :D You're doing great! The next chapter is quite possibly even better, but it's a hard decision as they are all good in their own respective ways. You can't delete one or else it'd ruin the story and I love it too much for that ;) Excited to see people's reactions to next chapter :D You go girl! woot woot ;) hahaha
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