|Reviews for The Laws of Unnatural Selection|
| cemmia chapter 2 . 4/20/2014
Really good story!
| GlOmP3R chapter 2 . 2/17/2014
Loved this ! Aha, Glenn is too cute, so is Daryl ! Lmao ! Kickass job, can't wait for more !
| link55-06 chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
Thank you for such an enjoyable read. I love to see this side of Daryl.
| i luv ewansmile chapter 2 . 6/18/2013
What a great story!
| 008800deleteme chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
You build tension very well, that deer hunting scene couldn't be any more wrought with it.
Also memorable was the discussion of 'what is the point of just surviving?' and how succinctly you run down other's reactions before drawing it back into the convo was skilled.
Good read, I hope you come back to it.
| TeruKurebayashi chapter 2 . 10/17/2012
I have an account, but too lazy to sign in. Hehe, eating of the dear made me giggle. Bet it felt like hot, meaty sex. Glenn's tongue was having budgasms :P. Is this the end? Doesn't seem like it, and I hope not :D. *jumps back up to the top to see this was updated last year* Ah, I see :(. Nice story .
| Coira MacClyde chapter 2 . 7/5/2012
I love the bromance between Glenn and Daryl. I had never thought about what kind of relationship they currently or could possibly have. You never really see them interacting with each other very much since Daryl isolates himself most of the time. I see now why this kind of interaction would be a good addition to the show. It's a very believeable scenario too.
Your writing skills are a lot better than most of the people on here. Usually people don't put much effort into fanfiction or are fairly illiterate to start with. It always ruins a story slightly in my opinion if the punctuation, grammar etc. isn't great. The only thing I would suggest is to perhaps add a tiny bit more description although it won't inmpact the story very much. All of the characters don't seem to be out of character in any way. Everything seems pretty damn good I must say :).
I'm all for slash and stuff but I'm not convinced that Daryl and Glenn would be getting that close and personal any time soon unless there's some big plot twist. Boondock Saints is one of my favourite films too so I don't mind you slipping a few quotes in there ;3.
I'm wondering if you're still continuing this as I would love to see more from you.
| Ravenclaw Samurai chapter 2 . 5/2/2012
I don't mind slashy. In fact I'm a fan now thanks to fics like Reader's Muse. Your Hunting 101 with Glenn and Daryl is great and I thought you stayed true to their original characters. I'd love to see their relationship develop. More please!
| Kathy P chapter 2 . 2/6/2012
I absolutely loved this story. Really strong and some good 'male bonding' without any naughty business!
Well written too!
| Feathered Filly chapter 2 . 11/14/2011
Hey! I found you over here just by fluke! I'm serendie over on livejournal. I was craving some non-slash stories to read, and I was just about to give up when I found your little gem. I'm so glad you kept this a strictly bromance fic and didn't add a slash epilogue. You know how I feel about the whole Daryl/Glenn thing not really making any sense since the two of the barely even interact. I really do hope you'll continue your gen fics for this fandom, since you seem to be the only one writing them. Everything else is slash and romance.. and if I'm going to be completely honest, I've actually fallen totally in love with the whole Carol/Daryl relationship after that cute little ending to the episode. But, still, I only really like that pairing in an awkward innocent kind of way, by no means do I want explicit porn like so many other people turn their fav pairings into. Also, I like the Daryl/Carol thing as a sort of mother/son relationship, even though there isn't that large of an age difference, I still think that dynamic is cute as well between those two characters.
Anyway, again, I hope you continue to write gen stories for this fandom- there really needs to be some Rick/Daryl angsty, hurt/comfort fics (because really, I love those two as brothers, especially with the way their relationship first started) and throw some Dale or Shane in there and it would be even more awesome. I think I may have a plotbunny forming in my head, but it'd be outta place on the kink meme, since it's not kinky or porny.
| Koenta chapter 2 . 11/2/2011
Loving the bromance. This is exactly what I've been needing! Not slash but the chemistry going on between Daryl and Glenn in this story is just perfect. I can't wait for more! Please keep them coming!
| LobsangLudd chapter 2 . 10/21/2011
Really a great story, I love your characterization of Daryl. Hope there is more coming!
| Aussies're Aggro chapter 2 . 10/20/2011
I'm loving this so far; you keep a steady plot but at the same time it's interesting and exciting.
The characters interact belivably and don't jump from one place to another.
Definatly a favourite. 3
| DbKiT chapter 2 . 10/6/2011
I'm glad you didn't make it overtly slashy (because to me slash why?) But an excellent story over all. Amazingly in character. I had a smile on my face from beginning to end.
Oh and Shane is a jerk. But I can't help but feel sorry for him. Anybody who has read the comic should know.
| Scoro chapter 2 . 9/30/2011
What a great read! I've really enjoyed this so far. I like bromance better than romance, as there is already a lot of slash out there, so I hope you keep it bromance. But the story is, of course, all yours so you should do what you want with it. Again, I really like this, and I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Great job!