Reviews for Taking Off the Mask
KrisEleven chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Loved it. The increase in tempo was really well done, and actually made me pick up the pace as I read. Loved the craziness of him, you wrote it well.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Very good! Awesome descriptive language :)
-Zeny
Jfan7154 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
I liked it. It's a totally believable way to how he would go about it.
The Great Guru of Stupidstuff chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Haha...cool. I love the Joker and I really like how you're shown him "putting on his face" in the morning (Is it morning? Whatever...). A fun and subjective piece. Now go write something else!
Anonymouse chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Pretty good, there. The overall flow and cadence of the words and sentences could be better. Maybe switch out some words for others (,a thesaurus is a friendly dinosaur).

But since you wrote it years ago, I can only assume you've become better. So publish some more. Honestly, jeez. You think a writer would write more, even at school. :p

That said, you paint a good picture. I can tell it's a tree and a ball, instead of monkey swimming. But, the technique could be better, maybe make sure you have the exact right shades of colors to paint a picture of words with. /end metaphor. /end review.