|Reviews for Better Left Unsaid|
| Mia chapter 1 . 3/12
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| melissa.hanung chapter 3 . 3/12
I was wondering before but now its affirmative. You hated kakashi didnt u? Its pretty obvious... oh but i wonder what to become of ino shika cho formation now they no longer together
| melissa.hanung chapter 2 . 3/12
Aaah! Loving this! This is so much better than the sealed kunai *which i dropped* i love naruto and his naruto-ness and sealed kunai just... werent naruto. Im glad i switched to this title
| Bakaneko-chan11 chapter 63 . 3/8
If you update soon, I'll give you a cookie! It'll be the best cookie you've never had! Come on, please? I'll be your best friend?! Pwetty pwease? Must have more!
| Guest chapter 58 . 3/6
Jesus fuck man, you do realize that Orochimaru, with Yukimaru's body and all of his original abilities makes him like a combination of Naruto's sage mode and bijuu mode strength wise. Overpowered to epic proportions, not including the fact he has his own sage mode and the ability to subdue another's bijuu as well. Even if you write it so he loses, if he were to actually to gain that power, it wouldn't realistically happen.
| Sorasdream chapter 1 . 3/6
Oooo, Naruto's got a Jutsu! Hopefully some of what Iruka told him will stay with him and he'll practice. No one has told him anything about the Kage Shadow clone Jutsu and how it helps a person learn things through memory feedback, yet. That would help Naruto a lot in training.
Sounds great so far!
| Guest chapter 53 . 3/6
This chapter kinda' flopped because you have too much going on, when you have this many people interacting at once in separate, things get complicated. Everyone would have to come together and fight in one place next chapter for things not to be complicated and flow well, but that most likely won't happen with how you write.
| Guest chapter 52 . 3/5
By the way, the suffix used in calling Sasuke-teme is completely incorrect. In an overly direct translation, teme would be treated as meaning bastard, hence: Sasuke-bastard. But this is not true, there is a falling off point in translation that doesn't make it, teme is actually and incredibly mean and very disrespectful way to call somewhat out, essentially saying the word you aggressively. Which would make the phrase Sasuke-you. Also, teme wouldn't be used casually (more as a direct and sudden insult in instances of anger, such as a fight) as it is so disrespectful that it would be frowned upon in japanese conversation, so "I agree with Sasuke-teme." Is not only gramatically incorrect, but socially unacceptable.
| Greatazuredragon chapter 30 . 3/3
I really like your stories, the battle scenes are always amazing! This battle is especialy good, very well written, nice work. I love your little "side stories" at the end too, Jiraya's book is awesome! And he is right, there is no problem that cant be solved with the correct use of high powered explosives! :)
| Malichite chapter 58 . 3/1
I gotta say, I REALLY like how you portray Orochimaru. I always thought they could have done SOOO much better with him, but seemingly pawned him off as a near pointless plot device for Sasuke... Kinda annoying as it was.
I like how you basically took what Orochi really was and fleshed him out more, gave us more on him since we see hints to the points you make in this chapter about him in the anime. You can't convince people and get such blind devotion like he gets from sooo many of his underlings unless your doing something right.
Stories are always better when you have a totally badass villain, it just makes the win against them soo much more gratifying.
Keep up the awesome work,
| Karthaugh1 chapter 47 . 3/1
Something I've never quite understood about your ratings system is what they are relative to. Kimimaro is listed as Ninjutsu 5, does this put him in the same league as the Madaras/Hashiramas? same level as the Yondaime Hokage? 1-5 leaves a pretty narrow window for power differentials, so it's a bit strange to think about.
| ShineX chapter 22 . 2/27
love the scene at the end, really awesome lol
| darkerdeepdown chapter 7 . 2/26
lol I know this chapter is ages old for you, but I have to say that is some good advice. I will be sure to keep it in mind
| ShineX chapter 9 . 2/26
...how does the mirror thing help in this case? She'd have to freeze a hell of a lot of water to make him get stuck in the dome. As it is all he'd have to do is quit water walking lol
| ShineX chapter 1 . 2/25
for so long your summary of this fic really off-put me. Any summary that questions something the way you put it really doesn't work well for me most of the time. Well, I've read several of your other fics by now, and the reviews on this thing are truly massive, so I thought to give it a try. Glad I did, I already see that spark in your writing that's gotten me hooked on 3 other fics you've made lol :)