Reviews for Better Left Unsaid |
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![]() ![]() Please Update this story my friend. I beg of you |
![]() ![]() ![]() GAHDAMN! ASUMA TURNED NARUTO INTO A WWE SUPERSTAR! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thats so mean...Poor Naruto didn't really had friends or a mom or a dad waiting for him. What else could he do? I guess none of the kids know this though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shiho chan supremecy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto actually beat transformed gaara without actually using so much kyuubi chakra but here when he is much more powerful, he is being manhandled |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is just stupid, gaara's transformation gives him so many abilities and same with Fuu but when it comes to naruto he just gets stronger and faster and heals really fast too, but those does not seem to make any significant effect, he hits gaara but it does not deal damage, he is so fast but cant bypass the defense, he heals really quickly but his body still hurts, why the fuck did you even gave Naruto the kyuubi if all he does is do some tricks and even then those are not very effective |
![]() ![]() ![]() naruto seems the only one who is scared of gaara here, every second he is thinking of gaara, how much discomfort he brings or something like that and no one else seems to be like that |
![]() ![]() What’s ganja? |
![]() ![]() ![]() really hope this story hasn't been abandoned |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just finished reading this for the first time, and I have to say that this story is absolutely fantastic - from the plot, to the character development and their interactions with each other, NaruIno, your take on the Naruto-verse, and your writing, this story is a masterpiece. One thing I really loved about this story was the relationships the characters had with each other. Whether is was Sasuke's interactions with Jirayia or Tsunade, Sasuke's slow-burning friendship with Naruto, or Naruto relationships/interactions with others, it all felt genuine and realistic; it never once felt forced for the plot, it felt that as if everyone had a true connection/reasoning for their interactions. I think these genuine interactions are hard to come by in fics because many authors want to force that connection rather than let it build naturally. Another aspect I loved was how you branched away from cannon into your own vision of the landscape of Naruto. Once again, many authors fail to properly separate the two and you did it seamlessly. That said, I only have two complaints. First being Naruto's character development post time skip. I did not like his new characteristics - he seemed too pompous, arrogant, and a little bit of a playboy. I understand that Naruto is eccentric in cannon and within your story, but his time skip seemed a bit too much for me; that said, it is a minor complaint when compared to your fantastic story. My other complaint is that this story is no longer being updated - WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS! You have created a quality piece of work, and I know that it is greatly challenging to not only create a story, but also maintain a story that has been developing since 2010. I hope you consider finishing this wonderful story! Kenchi, you did a fantastic job and I hope to see this story completed one day. I know that the odds are against us, but this is masterful piece of fiction! Great job! 99/100 |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a fantastic story! I am just engrossed with your work! I can’t wait to see how this story progresses! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update Pls |
![]() ![]() Just reread the story in its entirety after a few years. Love it so much. Hope that it updates again at some point and we get the entire war arc. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just read your story. Your entire story. AMAZING ! I do not know if you still update it or not but thank you for this great moment you made me live. |