Holy shit this is phenomenal. Please keep up the good work!

Was that a secret anti-gun rant you snuck into the chapter? How lame if so

As I'm rereading this it's a lot of fun to watch your progress as a person and bits of your personal life... People do indeed read your words, all of them not just the story.. I like knowing I'm not the only one that has a real life... Complete with shitty car..

Oh my God please update this! I forgot to favorite it the first time and after 20 minutes searching here I had to search Google for over half an hour to find it! It's really good please please post the next chapter3!

For the love of god stop complaining about every chapter

wtf is that ash and gary

Aww i was expecting naruto to explode. What else comes outa naruto of all people gathering his chakra and forcing outwards.

Dont do it dont do it dont do it dont do it

People assume he's wearing jumpsuit but he's not, he's wearing a tracksuit. Honestly his best tracksuit was the one from Shippuden ngl, it looks so cool.

Team 10

Uzumaki Naruto

Ninjutsu: 3
Taijutsu: 3
Genjutsu: 1
Intelligence: 2
Strength: 3.5
Speed: 3
Stamina: 4
Hand-Seals: 1

Total Score: 20.5

Nara Shikamaru

Ninjutsu: 2.5
Taijutsu: 1.5
Genjutsu: 2.5
Intelligence: 5
Strength: 1.5
Speed: 2
Stamina: 1.5
Hand-Seals: 2.5

Total Score: 19

Yamanaka Ino

Ninjutsu: 2.5
Taijutsu: 2
Genjutsu: 2
Intelligence: 2
Strength: 1
Speed: 2.5
Stamina: 2
Hand-Seals: 2

Total Score: 16

Amazing story! Looking forward to the next chapters and (hopefully) the eventual completion of this fanfic!

I don’t understand people who read several chapters and complain about all of then, if you don’t like don’t read it, it’s annoying, besides there is a multitude of authors to be enjoyed here, go read another story! Also, fanfic authors are doing us a favor, they don’t receive anything to be writing, critiscism is fine, but bashing is not, even if it was a bad story (its not).

ok so naruto is nothing but a disgrace to life and his parents memories koom-by-ya my lord bullshit kill yourself

time to skip away from chapter 13 until i find out where naruto learns the truth so i can make plenty of i told you so comments

no damage to the body ino controls does not transfer to inos body thats almost the most retarded and ignorant shit you habe written yet. your so very fucking stupid in no way could this happen period its impossible