you and yer made up jutsu that dont exist. individual moves in a martial art style are not each a different jutsu and not to mention they are just normal martial art techiniques that dont use or need chakra like an actual jutsu would your complete ignorance is why you will always be a fucking idiot who cant write for nothin

naming all his martial art moves and then having them said right before he uses them is just the most retarded crap

lmao just more koombya my lord and yessa massa bullshit

i havent even gotten past this horribly written zabusa fight you really fuck up everything you write its amazing

this idiot doesnt know how write a fight and definitely is a sheep of the worst kind which makes sense why this pathetic naruto is the same

now im just skipping lots of really retarded shit

stupid trash

this brain dead faggot cant write anything this must be stolen and this douche is responsible for the rewritten parts that dont make any sense or just ruin the story. blatantly forced plot.

naruto is a dumb slave bitch

koombya koombya kill yourself

yeah this will never be anything but a pathetic little bitch slave naruto. its ok every one ignored him and never took care of him and attacked him and i believe people even tried to kill him. they lied about his parents for no reason and keep him from his family legacy and expect him to be there good little guard fox. none of that shit is remotely forgivable especially the part where they shit all over narutos parents memory by not taking care of naruto and raising him properly and letting him be treated the way he was. if naruto can be a good slave bitch after that hes definitely a disgrace to his parents memory

konoha shits all over the memory of narutos parents and the poor kid doesnt even realize it. i really hope he doesnt continue being a sheep.

poor pathetic slave naruto.. its disgusting

smoking cigarettes seriously you dumb faggot this shit just keeps getting worse naruto is dumber than rocks and would never learn shit and now he smokes cigarettes making him even dumber and smell as bad as a 100 year olds dirty asshole thats never been clean. so he is stupid and stinks to high heaven so now he always leaves a sent trail behind that a regular untrained ignorant fucktard could follow

well after smokin a bowl i decided to give it a 3rd try and i have to say i should be done with this rather quickly since i be skipping all the dumb and useless shit thats a waste of time which doesnt leave much left in these chapters