Oh? Action coming?
Hinata's cute when she react about Naruto 'smoking' xD
Yhe way the characters react feel so natural and smooth, it's a pleasure to read

Hohoo? Ino seems to already take notice of Naruto, and the relations to other characters so far are shaping up more and more
Nice

Please write more soon

Nice

Encountering some characters generally seen later from the start, interessing take, and very positive on Naruto's progresses it seems

God glowing reoommendations for this fic, seems really well written. The Ino slash is interesting too, I always thought she wasn't as developed as she could

This chapter was awesome sauce. Nuff said

I REALLY like the way you did narutos fox aura release for the first time. In my opinion this arc is better than the original.

Finding someone else to run as Hokage, as a writer, is always difficult when going away from Canon I feel like. In just about any story, Jiryaiya is hardly a good pick. Up next no "Named" ninja is good for the part other than Danzo and Kakashi other than Tsunade.
I feel like Kenchi did a decent job keeping Hiruzen in place though.

I thought this was discontinued lmao

it should be fucking illegal for you to be this good dude. if my gamestop investment pays off I swear I'm just going to hire you to brainstorm new shit and just bankroll whatever crazy doneness you come up with. it would be the literal least I could do in return for all the free entertainment that I've waited anxiously for updates for since your FMA fic. keep going dude!

Keep up the good work, man!
I really enjoy your stuff.

Better than the manga in my opinion, though I'm still a die hard NaruHina fanboy to my core.

Thanks for the chapter.

I enjoyed, thank ya kindly.

Send me your venmo so I can send you some money to keep the story going!