Reviews for Better Left Unsaid
bakapervert chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
This is the first time I read explanation about how Naruto pull off drawing the entire mountain. Usually other author just write that Naruto's stealth is so awesome he deceive all ninja. Good job. And for the chapter, it's quality is good as usual though for the story I'll reserve judgement till I see where you're going with this.
Lazielow chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Good beginning !

Please hurry up with next chapter.
Balatros chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Oh I like this story already, you have the ability to key the pulse technique into the kage bushin to help him with complete situational awareness. You could even go one step further and have a Hyuuga help him with the Jutsu in order for him to make it more effective!

great job, I am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter!
werd me chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
nice keep it up
MaxExp chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Cool...

A simple change in story line...

Want to see where you take it... i like all except for 1 of your ficks... so chances are it will be good one...

Even then hoe are you going to pull of the wave arc without him knowing about kyuubi...

AnyWhay keep up the good work...

By the way good addition in arsenal for starter... sensing is one of the fields he improves at the end and even that in sage mode... putting it at the start... let see where it will go...
road kill609 chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
This looks interesting, I don't think that I've seen this type of divergence before. Also, about the new jutsu,I think that after he learns the rasengan (better control) or something it would be feasable that he could use it like a sort of kaiten bomb, put enough in, focus the length, and boom.
Jyuubi6 chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
So far there isn't much of a difference at all from what I can tell, just the exploitation of a tactic skill, a new jutsu, and not knowing he's a jinchuuriki, but like you said, butterfly effect will take care of it I suppose. Also, any clue who you'll pair him up with, since your other stories have been either oc or kyuubi, but SoF is AU modern, so that doesn't count. I guess you may not any ideas this early, but if you do have a pairing in the fix, can we by get hinata's or sakura, simply because they're done to death. A less common but not crack pairing like ino or temari would be a lot better in my opinion.
Lanky Nathan chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Hmmm... not too much movement yet but I can see where things will get interesting. The trend with your stories is also that it takes a few chapters to get moving but once they are they are one hell of a ride.

Oh, and one quick thing. When Mizuki slashed at Iruka, it would have nearly severed his TRACHEA ie. wind pipe. The esophagus sits behind that so he would have already have had to slit his throat from ear to ear before getting that far.
Hachichiyyin chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Rome wasn't built in one day. I do hope however that Naruto will be less stupid, as Canon Naruto has an IQ slightly better than an oyster.

The concept is pretty interesting though, since most Naruto fics use the whole Kyubi-is-teaching-Naruto or Kyubi-is-lending-LOTS-of-power-to Naruto!plot device.

It will be nice to know how Naruto will get strong without the knowledge of the Kyubi in his belly.
bub23453 chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
my only concern is you're putting too many stories out there with no ending in sight for any of them. other than that, great start to a great story.

And in an ironic twist, what do you think about writing a story where Naruto died at birth along with Kushina. and (well with artistic licence ofcourse) LEE got the Kyuubi (cos he would be born that day.). Man that'd be fascinating to see! wonder if Lee would manage to have that many friends from enemies as Naruto.
VizeerLord chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
i am expecting no less then 6-16 chapters.

can you concieve of the possiablities...mixed with his multi-shadow clone jutsu...his sex-jutsu mixed with the clones...
dragonshaun9 chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
another one kenchi? okay, i'll bite. interesting concept.
Ninpou chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
i'm not realy sure about this one.. however, i'll keep reading it because your the writer! so lets hope naruto becomes badass!
Vallavarayan chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
sucj a small change...

such a large effect...

u should have iruka telling naruto to practice chakra control- starting with the one he missed in the academy and continue on to the tree climbing etc.

also, any chance of this being naruhina?
Z-Breezy chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
I hope this naruto is badass like the one's in your other story,also will this be a harem like the sealed kunai
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