Reviews for Better Left Unsaid
dragonshaun9 chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
another one kenchi? okay, i'll bite. interesting concept.
Ninpou chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
i'm not realy sure about this one.. however, i'll keep reading it because your the writer! so lets hope naruto becomes badass!
Vallavarayan chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
sucj a small change...

such a large effect...

u should have iruka telling naruto to practice chakra control- starting with the one he missed in the academy and continue on to the tree climbing etc.

also, any chance of this being naruhina?
Z-Breezy chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
I hope this naruto is badass like the one's in your other story,also will this be a harem like the sealed kunai
demons936 chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
another story, really? so thats what your fifth atm. dont burn yourself out.

anyway im gonna start reading now, and ill let you know what i think.

ok well im done reading, and i dont really know what i think yet. other than you need to update sealed kunai again. but thats a given. ill sleep on it, and send you a message tomorrow :P.

good luck on fall exams btw
karthik9 chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
it is good chapter i look forward to future updates
Blue Baby Blanket chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
That was a good explanation for why Naruto wears orange. I think it's the first time someone came up with something like that.

Other then that, It'll be nice to see a Naruto that uses his head for once, and not just for headbutting.

I think Iruka and Naruto are underestimating his skills. Since Naruto did create the sexy technique that shows he has advanced skill with the transformation technique. He would be good at infiltration missions with it.

He could always use the replacement technique with his shadow clones to save himself from a lethal hit.

Even if Naruto learned how to use the basic clone technique he could use them with his shadow clones to disorient his opponents.

Okay, I admit it, I got those ideas from Chunin Exam Day. For all it's faults, Perfect Lionheart did demonstrate how good Naruto could be with just the basics to enhance his shadow clone technique.

Are you going to keep the teams the same? Given Naruto's new locating technique, his infiltration skills and scouting potential with the shadow clone technique, he would fit better with Ino and Shikamaru then Choji, who would make team seven a Nin/Tai/Genjutsu trio.
9taileddestroyer chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
I'd pay... maybe -.-
Good start, I can hardly wait to see how it unfolds.
5-digit chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
I would pay if I had to to read your stuff... hell, do you know whenever I'm on fanfiction how many times I check to see if you updated 'Shinobi of the High Seas'? Or how many times I read it? The fact of the matter is your stories rock, and i'm sure many of your fans would agree if not all of them.

Anyway this story shows promise, I can see Naruto using that technique better with his high chakra reserves.
Junky chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Hm, I have seen stories like this but they usually end up normal enough ... he has to find out about it sometime. Then again, you're a spectacular writer. I want to see where you'd go with this.
animegamemaster6 chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
I was kinda iffy on the idea at first, but I gave it a try cause all of your other stuff kicks ass... But you've sold me on it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
irae2007 chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Judging by that last bit of advice Iruka gave Naruto, and his reaction to it, I'm going to guess he wont be a total retard? You pull off the smart Naruto fics pretty well so.. This should be good.
Carumati chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Yeah! The Butterfly effect rocks!

That also means that He won't be the first one in the open at Kakashi's bell test right? Or will the habit be too concrete in his mind to break that quickly?
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