Reviews for Melon
Yokiryuu chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
hahahahahahaa - priceless... poor ichigo.. but dumb of him to fall for that. Hahaha
Hitta-or-Destany chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
...He fucked a are a genious. )
Kiyoi.Aiyoku chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
That was indeed hilarious! Poor Ichigo! I definitely wouldn't mind a sequel to this! Renji should totally make it up to Ichigo!
timbercat133 chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
Oh my god! This almost made me cry! So funny, good job, tatally had to share it with freinds. We couldn't stop laughing, and my guy freind who was present for the reading of your story said he wanted to try that. When we asked him why he said, "Well, it's the next best thing ain't it?"

His words exactly! Good job, loved it
gollumsfriend chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
He must have been going to town on that melon! XD Nicely written!
wolfgurlwriter1725 chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
ohmygod that was too funny! i was soooo not expecting that for an ending
IkimonoNoNoru chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Bahahahahahahahahaaaa! This just made my entire freaking YEAR! 333 Ohh, funny as Hell. I loved it! I was not expecting it to be this entertaining, especially since I found it in the Romance section. xDDD
BBFTW chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
LMFAO. xDD best story ever.
Sou JaeAn chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
hahahaha this is an awesome story! one of the funniest i've read. good job haha
priestess-n-training chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
Ow! But yet so hot... is that wierd?
EirBear93095 chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
omg! I lmao'd lolz. great story .
Swintar chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
PSHAHA! That was awesome! Very amusing and well written. 3
Not nameless chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
By gawd you have brought tears to my eyes from laughing I shall now fav this xD
SyntheticSonnet chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Aquamarine Dragon chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
woooow haha XD

Wonder what Ichigo is planning for revenge?

I'd love to know.

good writing!:)
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