Aaaaaaaaah! Words cannot express how much I enjoyed reading this XD

I kind of melted into a little puddle of slash-fangirl glee when I read that the exact words of the bargain Sarah agreed to were "You're first-born child will be mine." I mean come on, it took me all of half a second to catch the double meaning there. I feel like she needs a little committee of fangirls on standby to translate Jareth's words for her. Although they would probably be on his side anyway XP

Another amazing fanfiction.. :) I love your writing and your stories are quite amazing. Jareth being evil is something I like also. I plan on reading the rest of your fanfictions.. :)

Awww poor Toby.

I love your Jareth. I've been getting tired of the charming, romantic sap that's more often found in this fandom. I've always figured he was a little more dangerous than that.

Excellent writing as well, I love your voice and the way it changes as Toby grows.

another absolutely amazing story. thanks a lot for that. and how fitting, that i'd read it just before christmas. it made me want to go back to writing again :) thanks for that too.

i cannot describe how much i liked the story- and it's too late tonight for my brain to deal properly with literary terms, so i'll just keep it at that. 10 out of 10.

Ah okay I see now. I had forgotten that last line.

I do hope Sarah returns.

And i hope you keep writing.

I miss your fics terribly.

Question who is the narrator in the prologue!

It can't be Sarah unless she got away from Jareth in the end!

questions questions!

Holy Cow.

I-this-you

*bow*

This is amazing and sad and lord the folklore and stories and everything is amazing and just hnnnng.

I need to check your profile and hope you have more.

SO beautiful, I REALLY liked the last line of the fic, it just pulled everything together and made it awesome. You write the best Dark!Jareth fics of all!

Although I didn't understand this line:

"Once I dreamed of strangers. A circle of strangers dressed in what looked like diamonds, with gold reversed in every hem of their robes. They stared sorrowfully at me. One tried to speak - and then I felt a complete absence of sound. Utter silence. Then the dream shattered like glass and I woke up choking with fear."

What does it refer to?

That was stunning. Thank you.

Another fantastic story. I was worried, at first, that your Jareth was going to be, well, nice! I really enjoyed how you altered your writing style throughout the story to fit Toby's age and maturity level. I'd love to see a new story from you soon!

Wow. What a head trip. There's so much more depth in this that cannot be said. To write it all down would take years and many pages and it wouldn't be enough.

I am dying to know all the angles that were put together to make this one. I've never seen this side of Jareth before. It's additively fascinating.

After all … I only ever agreed – that your firstborn child would be mine."

Oh... that no good so-and-so. Clever, clever, GK...

HAHA!

I hoped he hadn't used too much magic, because in the US a present like this would have cost a million dollars and have been invented by the CIA.

I LOVE his description - with magic going fwish fwish fwish. That is so cute.

Wow, that's some deep depression, wanting to melt into a puddle on the floor. I remember my days like that as a kid way back when. It really blows.