Ohhh, I love this story 33

To be honest when I got the notification about a new chapter I was like... what story is that, do I know it o0?

I had to reread the first two chapters :P But now I know why I put it on alert 33 I just hope the next wait won't be too long ;D

Anyhow... I love this side of Ren. It's just like I picture Kuon to be (without the violence... but maybe that's to come if he finds Kyoko and the Yuki-boy at his house? xD).

I don't know if I want you to continue this like my head tells me it could continue or not... but if you continue like that I hope Ren will get there in time xD (stupid brain, stop making Kyoko suffer T_T)

Keep going!

~Lya

Truthfully Ren's personality in this story is a bit complex. I don't know what to make of him. Does he like her or just want her? However I still like the story and the plot:) Its very interesting and I like all the new characters. Could you like make someone like Lory/President or like Kanae/Moko? That would be cool! Anywho update soon!:)

I think it's funny :) Ren is sort of...a jerk? Maybe. I can't tell. lol. It's not exactly like Ren is in the manga, but it is an interesting persona none the less. I look forward to the next chapter because I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY! :)

I really like our story.

It totally matches the character's personalities and is like a new outlook of skip beat.

Although, I do have a question, what is Ren's job?

And I am also wondering what Kyouko is going to call Ren, I mean he calls her Miss Kyouko, What will she call him, Mr. Ren. That's funny.

Anyway, please update asap. I really want to know what happens. And it was also funny that Shou was dumped by kyouko. It wasn't intentional, but funny.

Nice Story! :) Continue it...

Very interesting I cant wait to see what happens next!

Wowzers, this story is so original for Skip Beat! that it's rather refreshing. Kyoko's character is different yet still her and Ren is still Ren, admiring from afar. I could tell that he's had his eyes on her for a while now but had been too much of a whimp to do anything about it till now! XD

This story is making my Good Story Radar go berserk, so please update it soon! I noticed the gap between the first and second chapter and I very much hope that you won't make it a trend...

~Peanut

Oh please, I love this AU fanfic really much. I just read it today since I never seen it before...

Anyway, I hope you update soon since the last chapter was close to a year ago ." Unless you have writer's block, I would understand but to have such a long wait is kinda... like you love cliffhangers that pull people in. Cliffhangers are good but if the next chapter takes a while, then it makes people wait too long and they soon forget the whole story.

Not like I am complaining... Anyway, keep on writing! Gambatte! (Is waving pom poms to cheer Premus on!)

I tried to read this fic, but I could not endure the terrible formatting.

From the look of it, it seems like this has been imported from a text file where word wrap has been enforced by means of a carriage return at a certain character width. This makes it look terrible and unreadable when converted to html, especially on a site like this where many formatting options are removed.

Poor Kyouko freaking out like that. I am glad you have kept them in character. 3 Update soon~!

Oooooohh dat is sooo interesting ! Lol Ren is soo kind . For real man only cooking ? Too nice . Too suspicious . Lol I wonder who's da nephew person dat lady was talking bout . Hmmm .

hah hah hah. Interesting story, take your time writing the next chapter.

I'm so happy you updated! It was really good, and I was kind of surprised he was so nice. I'm curious as to what will make him reveal his true self. lol. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

I am liking this. I think your story is going tot fall nicely with the characters.

i thought ren would ask kyoko to marry him

well, never mind i like this chapter and please update soon!

it's an interesting start, I'll be looking forward to the next one, hope you update soon!