Reviews for I Own U
Lya.van.Lou chapter 3 . 12/13/2011
Ohhh, I love this story 33

To be honest when I got the notification about a new chapter I was like... what story is that, do I know it o0?

I had to reread the first two chapters :P But now I know why I put it on alert 33 I just hope the next wait won't be too long ;D

Anyhow... I love this side of Ren. It's just like I picture Kuon to be (without the violence... but maybe that's to come if he finds Kyoko and the Yuki-boy at his house? xD).

I don't know if I want you to continue this like my head tells me it could continue or not... but if you continue like that I hope Ren will get there in time xD (stupid brain, stop making Kyoko suffer T_T)

Keep going!

Big Unni234 chapter 3 . 12/13/2011
Truthfully Ren's personality in this story is a bit complex. I don't know what to make of him. Does he like her or just want her? However I still like the story and the plot:) Its very interesting and I like all the new characters. Could you like make someone like Lory/President or like Kanae/Moko? That would be cool! Anywho update soon!:)
EmilyF.6 chapter 3 . 12/13/2011
I think it's funny :) Ren is sort of...a jerk? Maybe. I can't tell. lol. It's not exactly like Ren is in the manga, but it is an interesting persona none the less. I look forward to the next chapter because I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY! :)
Caramel chapter 2 . 8/25/2011
I really like our story.

It totally matches the character's personalities and is like a new outlook of skip beat.

Although, I do have a question, what is Ren's job?

And I am also wondering what Kyouko is going to call Ren, I mean he calls her Miss Kyouko, What will she call him, Mr. Ren. That's funny.

Anyway, please update asap. I really want to know what happens. And it was also funny that Shou was dumped by kyouko. It wasn't intentional, but funny.

Nice Story! :) Continue it...
FatesBlackAngel chapter 2 . 8/25/2011
Very interesting I cant wait to see what happens next!
thedeepestdaydream chapter 2 . 8/25/2011
Wowzers, this story is so original for Skip Beat! that it's rather refreshing. Kyoko's character is different yet still her and Ren is still Ren, admiring from afar. I could tell that he's had his eyes on her for a while now but had been too much of a whimp to do anything about it till now! XD

This story is making my Good Story Radar go berserk, so please update it soon! I noticed the gap between the first and second chapter and I very much hope that you won't make it a trend...

CrystalMage149 chapter 2 . 8/24/2011
Oh please, I love this AU fanfic really much. I just read it today since I never seen it before...

Anyway, I hope you update soon since the last chapter was close to a year ago ." Unless you have writer's block, I would understand but to have such a long wait is kinda... like you love cliffhangers that pull people in. Cliffhangers are good but if the next chapter takes a while, then it makes people wait too long and they soon forget the whole story.

Not like I am complaining... Anyway, keep on writing! Gambatte! (Is waving pom poms to cheer Premus on!)
yasuhei chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
I tried to read this fic, but I could not endure the terrible formatting.

From the look of it, it seems like this has been imported from a text file where word wrap has been enforced by means of a carriage return at a certain character width. This makes it look terrible and unreadable when converted to html, especially on a site like this where many formatting options are removed.
842072 chapter 2 . 8/24/2011
Poor Kyouko freaking out like that. I am glad you have kept them in character. 3 Update soon~!
CuddleMeBear chapter 2 . 8/23/2011
Oooooohh dat is sooo interesting ! Lol Ren is soo kind . For real man only cooking ? Too nice . Too suspicious . Lol I wonder who's da nephew person dat lady was talking bout . Hmmm .
latafmodginkianp37 chapter 2 . 8/23/2011
hah hah hah. Interesting story, take your time writing the next chapter.
EmilyF.6 chapter 2 . 8/23/2011
I'm so happy you updated! It was really good, and I was kind of surprised he was so nice. I'm curious as to what will make him reveal his true self. lol. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Longing4VraiLove chapter 2 . 8/23/2011
I am liking this. I think your story is going tot fall nicely with the characters.
21han chapter 2 . 8/23/2011
i thought ren would ask kyoko to marry him

well, never mind i like this chapter and please update soon!
Yelizaveta.13 chapter 2 . 8/23/2011
it's an interesting start, I'll be looking forward to the next one, hope you update soon!
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