Reviews for I Own U |
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![]() ![]() ![]() There's a lot of things you need to improve but for the most part your description is doing well and your concept is intriguing to say the least. |
![]() ![]() nice nice! cant wait for ur update for i own u! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where's the rest! :( I wanna read more. Please? I'm excited to see what he wants :D |
![]() ![]() I can't wait to read more! Its really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what a cruel cliff-hanger! please update soon ) |
![]() ![]() Interesting please update this soon |
![]() ![]() Please update soon this story is very interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon. I loved it, the story was different. |
![]() ![]() Luv this story please update soon P.S.- I don't have any complaints of this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'what i want is... you to married me' i really x 3 wish ren to say something like that! my heart feeling tight! i want to know what will happen next! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story looks like fun. Granted the situation isn't really fun. Still, I look forward to what you are going to do with this AU. Good writing too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yaaaay, an AU! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm.. interesting.. even though it's AU I like the path it's going.. keep up with the good work. you write well |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, what does he want... this is intriguing. I look forward to reading the deal. My only issue is wondering how Kyoko would be liable for loans that her mother took when she is a minor. If she is Japanese, she shouldn't be an adult until 20. If she is American, child welfare would so put her in a foster home until 18 if they discovered her mother ran off and left her alone. Oh well, real world aside, Kyoko is the kind of person who would feel responsible even if she was legally responsible so please ignore me... Oh, and I always love Ren caring for a sick Kyoko. She deserves some tenderness. She works so hard. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, oh my god! Ren, please, I beg you, say that you want her to marry you! Pleeeaaaaseeee! So nice your fic! I loved it! Continue soon, 'kay? |