Reviews for I Own U
BerryEbilBunny chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
There's a lot of things you need to improve but for the most part your description is doing well and your concept is intriguing to say the least.
greenbeanlimabean chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
nice nice! cant wait for ur update for i own u!
EmilyF.6 chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
Where's the rest! :( I wanna read more. Please? I'm excited to see what he wants :D
EMF6 chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
I can't wait to read more! Its really good.
Shinpi-no-Flame chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
what a cruel cliff-hanger! please update soon )
Manpreet chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Interesting please update this soon
Meena chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
Please update soon this story is very interesting
Atheria420 chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Please update soon. I loved it, the story was different.
Meena chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Luv this story please update soon

P.S.- I don't have any complaints of this story
21han chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
'what i want is... you to married me'

i really x 3 wish ren to say something like that!

my heart feeling tight! i want to know what will happen next!

alitablake chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
This story looks like fun. Granted the situation isn't really fun. Still, I look forward to what you are going to do with this AU.

Good writing too.
lara gin chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
yaaaay, an AU!
Shiroyuki76 chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
hm.. interesting.. even though it's AU I like the path it's going.. keep up with the good work. you write well
Jhiz chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
oh, what does he want... this is intriguing. I look forward to reading the deal. My only issue is wondering how Kyoko would be liable for loans that her mother took when she is a minor. If she is Japanese, she shouldn't be an adult until 20. If she is American, child welfare would so put her in a foster home until 18 if they discovered her mother ran off and left her alone. Oh well, real world aside, Kyoko is the kind of person who would feel responsible even if she was legally responsible so please ignore me... Oh, and I always love Ren caring for a sick Kyoko. She deserves some tenderness. She works so hard.
rika-chan21 chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
Oh my god, oh my god!

Ren, please, I beg you, say that you want her to marry you!


So nice your fic! I loved it!

Continue soon, 'kay?
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