thanks so much for writing and congrats on ur first story. i like it so far! i can't wait for an update!

iloooooveeeee this story. you should definitely update, and soon!

Very nice! Love the way you wrote the emotions. But I must say, very mean of you to leave me hanging. I mean come on, I reallllllly wanna know what Ren wants from kyouko! PLeeeeease update ASAP! Love the story! Cant wait to read more :D

That was addicting! The ending without anothr chapter available was cruelty... You have me hooked and I'm dying for more. Please update soon

O: How interesting! .

I look forward to reading the next chapter!

Which I hope is soon!

I like it... Really interesting and origional story

This promises to be a very enjoyable story. Please write more soon.

What is sad is that there really are stories such as this, but they very seldom end happily.

why is the words only to the left? O_o anyways its interesting . is 'ren tsuruga' still the same character? i mean like hes a bpopular celebrity n stuff... GAH! watever! i'll just wait for the next chapter

Nice story with a interesting plot...it sort of reminds me of Tokyo Paradise (by Nakamura) since the main character faces forced debt thats she has to repay by her using her body lol

but, your format is really weird. Its better to have it single spaced block format (most fanfics have this style. and dialogue has its own line per exchange)...idk how it ended up in 'one' column (thats what it looks like to me)

This is a really great piece of work. I eagerly await your next update.

-_- you're evil endin it like that... but it is making me curious as what you have planned next, but since its T rated a few of my ideas were thrown out the window.

Is he gonna ask her to be his fake girlfriend/sister? maid? i don't know so i hope the next chapter won't take too long.