Reviews for Lie
bbb136 chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
I am incredibly annoyed that I am not the first reviewer. Hmmph. _

But yeah anyways :)

This will sound really OTT but damn this piece of writing was good. :D I mean yaoi is always yummy (of course) but I could really feel the emotion in this. I had that strange sense of being unsettled at the end.

Oh and the reason you haven't gotten a reply to your message is because FF is being really weird and not letting me do stuff, like upload frikkin chapters. :/

P.S. Your story ideas that you mentioned? Bloody awesome, I feel stupid just reading them!
MaelstromsButterfly chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
"Awh... We do to have hearts, don't be mad."

Well, that's my viewpoint on it. Anyways, this is a great little fic. There's a lot of emotion compacted into this and it's simplistic, giving it more power. Very well written and well-thought out.

Atra esterni ono thelduin