I'm insanely curious about who the Entomologist is going to turn out to be. Right now I'm guessing James, but it's a pretty loose guess.

I just re-read this chapter while listening to The River by Chromatics. It has a similar kind of sad and resigned yearning to it.

Loved your story. Loved the style of your writing; the contrast between the depths into which the body and mind can be plunged and the way that it can rise up.

The graphic chapters were written so well they made me nauseated. These last couple chapters were so lovely they made my heart expand. Really wonderful. Thank you for sharing your writing.

Oh I loved this chapter. I especially loved your Esme. This might be my favorite Edward-Esme relationship that I've read. It was just so lovely. I also loved all your references to A Midsummer Night's Dream.

Aaah. Really enjoying your story. Though the creeper is infuriating.

I really liked your incorporation of Subterranean Homesick Alien into this chapter. I also loved the Chopin in your previous chapters. It seemed fitting. I love it when authors incorporate good music into their stories. I always find it disappointing and distracting when there are references to crap music. But that's probably because I'm a snob like that.

Thank you for the beautifully disturbing story. In the beginning, I wasn't sure I'd be able to read it but I'm so glad I did.

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Hoy Shit!

An amazing story, so well written in every aspect.

Thank you! What an intense journey. I'm now off to continue this through your outtakes. I wasn't ready to have the door closed so maybe these will give me the closure I seek. An amazing story and so well writen. Again, thank you for sharing. Juanita :-)

As I read this my mind is raged, filled with hate. You amaze me with the depth of the words, the emotions they bring to the surface. Real. I sat, read and felt.

This chapter was a nice stsrt to the day - they looked at each other and spoke. Two lost souls fighting for calm. But the creepy watcher seems to watching and this casuses an unease within as I hit next.

Here I am at the end of chp 10 at 0040 in the morning feeling just as lost and alone as these two. Thank you! This has so far been an amazing intriguing mystery of the heart.

Hello, I'm still here with you and working through all the emotions building. Working out who is watching, is the creepy guy or the still unknown rider or someone I have yet to meet. Intriguing and dard and I'm loving the mystery of the unkown.

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