|Reviews for The Downside of Procreation|
| L's Cappuccino chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
| inclement chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
You are amazing! I love that you can write angst (Soundtrack), AU
s (Daycare), AND amazing crack! What's really interesting is that angst tends to be in the present tense, and crack in the past, but Soundtrack and Daycare/this goes the opposite way.
I like your usage of parentheses in here; they are perfectly placed and add that resigned commentary that just make the story even funnier ;D Also, the narrative style of the piece is great...I'm not quite sure what it's called, but the almost-sarcastic tone fits the crack really well
I can't wait to see more of the children and their (mis)adventures!
| Nuriko Kurosaki chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
Ah this story is really cute so far! Even though it's only one chapter so far... But anyways I can't wait for more chapters!
| Kichou chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
I want to say that his kid came from Tsuna and Mukuro, but I'm not really sure. Nice chapter. Update soon please.