Reviews for Big Brother: The First Protector
BookLovingPersonR.B.L chapter 8 . 5/11
*sobs* this chapter was so beautiful!
Alex chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
OMG! THIS IS FRIGGIN' AWESOME!
te.nellis chapter 13 . 10/12/2013
Yay now it is a happy ending
te.nellis chapter 12 . 10/12/2013
There is a cure the fight is over then Susan is shot oh noes is it everyone's fave wanna be german mad scientist
te.nellis chapter 10 . 10/12/2013
Now we have Templars an English and Italien order of knights using German names because you know stereotypical bad guys and all that. And all hell breaks loose
te.nellis chapter 9 . 10/12/2013
That chapter made no sense. First they are basically defeated then try get Sara bad the thy flee with Sara what ?
te.nellis chapter 8 . 10/12/2013
Yay finally out of the doom and gloom and finally a glimmer of hope
te.nellis chapter 7 . 10/12/2013
Still dark and depressing flashbacks and a cool little town that is you know jur being attacked by splicers the usual
te.nellis chapter 6 . 10/12/2013
Well the town was cool. I love the detail you put into the dark and depressing flashbacks
te.nellis chapter 5 . 10/12/2013
That was a sad and extremely depressing action packed chapter. It was spectacular.
te.nellis chapter 4 . 10/11/2013
That was another sad but action packed chapter
te.nellis chapter 2 . 10/11/2013
That was a very sad and nostalgic chapter
te.nellis chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
Well that was a good start. Action was spectacular
starwars05 chapter 14 . 5/25/2013
Damn this is great. The second last chapter made me want to cry. Very good work eh.
mparts99 chapter 9 . 5/7/2013
This is quite literally, one of the best and most well written Bioshock fanfics I have ever seen!
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