|Reviews for Quandary|
| Krabkrab chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
| Momentary Pressure chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Very thoroughly enjoyed. It says "Part I", will there be more? Regardless, well written and I think you're versions of Light and Fang are the closest I've seen in comparison to their game counterparts. Kudos.
| Darkgirl5 chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
I love this story. You know I have a deep and abiding love for Lightning and Fang interactions-especially those that do not automatically have the two ladies stripping off and getting it on. The two characters play off each other well.
I love your characterization of Fang. I think most people miss the sadness behind the strength. And I like that you've resurrected her because, frankly, the turning to crystal at the end of the game felt like a total cop out to me on the part of the game designers.
Thanks for sharing.
| Apple chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
Thank you for proving that there are actual authors out there who does not see a Fang who lives on sex and flirting with Lightning, or see a Light who's either emo or a robot. I love this, I want more, and great work.
| Shiisaa chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Ooh, nice. I love the way you portray both Fang and Lighting differently from most fics.
Though I wonder why there are so many dead people...
Did they get Zerg'd or something?
| SumatraYen chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
Ooo. This is interesting.
I'm really liking the more serious persona Fang's got here. Suits here quite well. This side of her is definitely not portrayed nearly enough.
Also watched the video for Kyoudai before reading, and I gotta say, Fang playing the flute to that melody...
Daaymmn! That was one of the most attractive moments I've read about Fang yet. Can't wait to read more :)
| Anon chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
This is so great... I really hope you update soon! And I love the way you depict Fang. Please keep it up and thank you for a wonderful chapter!
| Astarael00 chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
The interaction between them makes me laugh, which is a very good sign. Should be interesting to see where this goes.
| Anonymous Viewer Ze chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
This is really nice , and even in a serious way i still very much enjoyed it . it's a nice change to see Fang's view in a serious and not flirtatious way .
it's really great and i would really like to see other chapters of it . please , continue on :)
the grammar and tenses mistakes aren't very troubling , we -the readers- know what you mean even if it's written wrongfully .
- ze -
| OerbaFarron chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
Uh-oh... cat fight between our two favorite women? Oh boy...
Update soon, I like this.