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Lunaris-wind chapter 3 . 7/25/2012
Ignoring the "irrelevant epilogue," I really enjoyed reading this story, and the who concept behind it made me laugh.
Smayz chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
This is such a good beginning. Edward and Jasper makes me smile too.
Louisvuittonfreak chapter 4 . 6/16/2011
Wow...never would expect that turn of was hot though... I really liked your story.
samaramorgane chapter 4 . 1/24/2011
I liked the different twist!:)
Citrus Fever chapter 4 . 1/23/2011
Awesome story :) and great love scenes ;D
lynettecullen chapter 4 . 1/18/2011
I liked the irrelevant epilogue. It really cheered me up.
Wendy55 chapter 4 . 1/18/2011
Had to skip over a half of the chapter - hearing about Edward and Jasper's activities isn't anywhere near the top of my list...
Boo chapter 4 . 1/18/2011
A whole chapter of THAT?

Where's Bella?

Where's Alice?

Awful chapter.
bleach number 1 fan chapter 4 . 1/18/2011
ummm not really my thing in the epilogue but you really have some skill in wrighting :) i loved this fic how it was played out great stuff i cant wait to see more of your work you wright a really good bella/alice and in the epilogue a very good edward/jasper lol good luck with your future work i look forward to seing it
Emovampire2940 chapter 3 . 1/12/2011
That was really good! I was laughing at emmets comments! dosnt everyone love him! well 2nd 2 li'l pixi here! love the ending and had a nice flow. Do they have any emmet posters? lol
The Unknown Twinkie chapter 3 . 1/8/2011
I like this story please update the last chapter soon
Just twisty chapter 3 . 1/7/2011
Very charming story, well done.
Cloudstrife3180 chapter 3 . 1/6/2011
Cant wAit for the last chapter, personally i didnt like the i was only kidding take on the bellice cuz it seemed un realistic otherwise it was good..
bellice chapter 3 . 1/3/2011
Such different take on the whole Bella/Alice story. How could Bella not be mad at Edward. He married her and he's gay and with Jasper. Then Alice is too afraid to pursue her. How could Jasper have stood by and not gotten all mate mode when his man was kissing and sleeping with Bella. Glad it all worked out in the end for them all but what a strange threesmoe agreement, well now with Bella foursome. I mean if your gay vamp your not going to date a human girl, then marry her just to keep up with what the city they live in thinks is going to happen. I mean what if Bella wasn't so ok with it. So risky of Alice and plain stupid. The whole coven was in the lie from the start. Guess you really can't trust vampires, even if they drink animal blood. Even though I don't agree with the whole plot, it was a great read.
bleach number 1 fan chapter 3 . 1/3/2011
wow amazing chapter i lovrd how you made them start slow building there relationship and stuff pretty cool and im curious about this last chapter i wonder what it will be good luck and i cant wait to find out
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