Reviews for Atlantis
Guest chapter 1 . 3/20
Well, this is a faily interesting start. I look forward to see the rest of the plot's development. However, Astrology and Astronomy are entirely different things. The sience that observes, calculates, and discusses the movement, constelation, rotation etc. of stars, planets etc. is Astronomy. Astrology is more like Divination.
HogwartsExpress934 chapter 20 . 2/17
God bless, this was too cute. I wish there was more,... foreplay, for lack of a better word, with Harry and Cedric's relationship. One minute, they're being cute, shy, and blushing, and then, BAM!, they're the loves of each other's lives.
Kris chapter 2 . 1/22
Not to be picky, but isn't Ginny too young to be a prefect? Also, and just trying to be helpful, try to have a different tone for dialogue for adults versus kids, with the possible exception of Hermione and Draco who have more training in speaking like an adult. Younger persons' dialogue should be more informal, with more slang, contractions, and sentence fragments, whereas adults have more variety of word choice, longer words, and a bit less modern slang.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/11
Not only is Albus out of character he is behaving OOC for how you previously portrayed him.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/11
There are some problems with this fic like why is Harry calling Snape 'Uncle' and how the hell did he get an OWL in Ancient Runes when he never took that course? Deviations like these from canon should be explained.
christinelbain chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
ok
Olaf74 chapter 20 . 8/21/2013
Absolutely and MEGA fantastic!
DragonFire Princess chapter 20 . 4/19/2013
Wow, super chapter, Hope the rest of the story is just as detail as this one is.
Oogies4u chapter 20 . 4/10/2013
nice mix... loved the idea:)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
i love this story it is great.
comellina chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
you were wise to put up warnings of oocness. oocness should at least be logical, with a hint or explanation in regards to why they are so. any how, i hope you improve more as a writer in the future and again, think thingsthoroughly. older chars somehow acted like children... i hope you note that as you are the writer, the all knowing being in your universe
Anime Princess chapter 20 . 11/20/2012
Such a nice ending to this fic. I LOVE that the Malfoy's got to change and even Draco got married to Hermione! NICE!
SeaBreeze2Ga chapter 20 . 11/19/2012
I just finished Atlantis and I have to say it was very well done, thank you for writing it.

SeaBreeze :-)
Gracealma chapter 20 . 11/17/2012
Excellent reading. Love the ending.
Gracealma chapter 19 . 11/17/2012
Alright, all the friends and family are together in Atlantis. Tom is the final adversary.
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